Mother knows Best
A 5-7-5 Poem14 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
There has never been a statement written that was more true than the message of your 5-7-5 poem for the contest. I didn't realize it until I was grown. Mother knew best all along. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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There has never been a statement written that was more true than the message of your 5-7-5 poem for the contest. I didn't realize it until I was grown. Mother knew best all along. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your very understanding review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Mother does know best. I recall the saying that "father knows best" so it is good to see a written poem stating that "mother knows best". Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Mother does know best. I recall the saying that "father knows best" so it is good to see a written poem stating that "mother knows best". Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, I Believe, has the right setup and notes the Catholic tradition of talking to Mother Mary when help is needed. Interesting.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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This 5-7-5, I Believe, has the right setup and notes the Catholic tradition of talking to Mother Mary when help is needed. Interesting.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Marienkiefer
Hello,
I appreciate your perspective and emphasis on three components of : "love" "faith" "hope". It is succinct and thought-provoking.
Good luck on your entry!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Hello,
I appreciate your perspective and emphasis on three components of : "love" "faith" "hope". It is succinct and thought-provoking.
Good luck on your entry!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Wendy G
Interesting and thought provoking with the third being true, but a twist from what the reader assumed was coming. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Interesting and thought provoking with the third being true, but a twist from what the reader assumed was coming. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.
Great theme, I love mother Teresa.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.
Great theme, I love mother Teresa.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Mia Twysted
When a parent loves you so much that it engrains the lessons of love and family on you it is special. That is what I feel from this piece, love. Lots and lots of love.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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When a parent loves you so much that it engrains the lessons of love and family on you it is special. That is what I feel from this piece, love. Lots and lots of love.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well written poem. Your poem reads and flows well. The last line concludes the poem well. The picture you chose compliments this poem well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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This is a well written poem. Your poem reads and flows well. The last line concludes the poem well. The picture you chose compliments this poem well. Nice job.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
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You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
You expressed a great message in only 17 syllables and four lines. Thank you for choosing to share this here. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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You expressed a great message in only 17 syllables and four lines. Thank you for choosing to share this here. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Yes, my mother usually knew best. And I saw Mother Theresa. Much thought is in this picture and poem. You have written a great poem with a few words. Thank you for posting.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Yes, my mother usually knew best. And I saw Mother Theresa. Much thought is in this picture and poem. You have written a great poem with a few words. Thank you for posting.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
