Blarney Stone Leprechaun Pat
Limerick for St Pat's day10 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, very good, very cute Limerick. I especially liked:
Through the hole fell down
Landing on his crown
That is now why he wears a big hat.
A fun poem that made me smile. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Hello author, very good, very cute Limerick. I especially liked:
Through the hole fell down
Landing on his crown
That is now why he wears a big hat.
A fun poem that made me smile. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Hi LateBloomer Thank you very much A bit of fun to have a go snd this is what came from my Muse ha ha
Glad you smiled. Smiling back
Cheers
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The World is in such a sad place now. We need more things to smile about.
Bloomer
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is cute. Thank goodness for his big hat. I like the colors. My dad's birthday would have been on St. Patrick's Day. My deceased husband was Irish. Had they not taken the O away, I would have been Carolyn O'Dooley.
Thank you for the cute post.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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This is cute. Thank goodness for his big hat. I like the colors. My dad's birthday would have been on St. Patrick's Day. My deceased husband was Irish. Had they not taken the O away, I would have been Carolyn O'Dooley.
Thank you for the cute post.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Hi Carolyn Thank you for your review and I appreciate your comments Whats in an O nearly lol
Cheers
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery Poet, a Good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your A Limerick prompt entry, I think you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Hello mystery Poet, a Good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your A Limerick prompt entry, I think you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Hi 13th Poet Thanks for your review and encouragement and Good luck wishes
Cheers
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The metre is a bit bumpy here but I love the sentiments of your Limerick and there is much fun and naughtiness in this little poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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The metre is a bit bumpy here but I love the sentiments of your Limerick and there is much fun and naughtiness in this little poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Hi Dolly
Thanks for your review and Comments re meter Yes I did struggle with that a lot and have once again gone back and altered it and hopefully it is ?smoother? this time and yes it is a little cheeky too ha ha
Cheers
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Blarney Stone Leprechaun Pat ' , is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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'Blarney Stone Leprechaun Pat ' , is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Hi Duchess Thank you very much it was fun to write lol
Cheers all round
Hi Anon. This is the way it should be !
the Duchess
Comment from R.B.Bunn
This was a cute limerick. The form was adhered to well and brought the humor with it. The picture picked also went well with it. Loved the lesson about the blarney stone at the end.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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This was a cute limerick. The form was adhered to well and brought the humor with it. The picture picked also went well with it. Loved the lesson about the blarney stone at the end.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Hi R.B.Bunn Thank you for taking the time to read and review my limerick It was a fun write and yes it is quite difficult to kiss the Blarney Stone.. (But worth the experience)
Cheers
Comment from jessizero
Happy St. Patrick's Day to you! I love limericks, and this is a great one. It's funny, just as one would expect. Thanks for sharing it here! Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Happy St. Patrick's Day to you! I love limericks, and this is a great one. It's funny, just as one would expect. Thanks for sharing it here! Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Hi jessizero. thanks for you great review and pleased you found it a funny limerick
Happy St Pats day back
Cheers
Comment from Shannon Ramos
The poem was cute and humorous. I applaud someone who can come up with prose full of humor. I, sadly cannot. I can never think of anything. My prose is always very dark. You did a great job.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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The poem was cute and humorous. I applaud someone who can come up with prose full of humor. I, sadly cannot. I can never think of anything. My prose is always very dark. You did a great job.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Hi Shannon Thank you for your review and positive comments re my writing
Can you tell me how I could improve this from an average rating as your comments don?t seem to reflect your rating if it was cute and humorous and I did a great job
Cheers
Comment from jaded831
you set my day off on a happy not. You made me laugh with your light heartedness. With all the things going on in the world at night my mind feels it is running a race I can never win. Thanks for the happy moment.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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you set my day off on a happy not. You made me laugh with your light heartedness. With all the things going on in the world at night my mind feels it is running a race I can never win. Thanks for the happy moment.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Hi jaded831. Thanks for your review and glad you had a laugh and made your day
Of course I know St Pat is not an ?animal? but entered this before I really looked at the limerick requirement lol
Happy St Pats day
Cheers
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I can assure you, wholeheartedly, that leprechauns are in no way, shape or form, animals.
St. Patrick was also not Irish... lol
I'm actually walking part of the St. Patrick's trail later today. It's not that big a chore, I live right by some of it! lol
Nice little piece, but no animals...
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Hi there,
I can assure you, wholeheartedly, that leprechauns are in no way, shape or form, animals.
St. Patrick was also not Irish... lol
I'm actually walking part of the St. Patrick's trail later today. It's not that big a chore, I live right by some of it! lol
Nice little piece, but no animals...
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Hi GMG Thanks for your review and please forgive my ignorance which I have since revised lol. Didn?t know St Patrick was in fact British but became an Irish Bishop and died on 17th March ( Hence St Pats day is celebrated) ( I googled him)
I didn?t mean to offend either , and when I wrote the Limerick in my haste, failed to see it was a supposed to be a limerick about an animal but then a little too late posted without noticing ha ha
Maybe I tried to stretch the truth a little too far making St Pat a leprechaun ??
Should I keep it in the contest or withdraw as not to offend anyone or will I be ?forgiven?
enjoy your walk
Cheers
