Under the Stars
10 words11 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
This piece gives a little hope to those that would be down on their luck. It tells them to unburden yourself and put your fate in the hands of someone who has a higher view.
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This piece gives a little hope to those that would be down on their luck. It tells them to unburden yourself and put your fate in the hands of someone who has a higher view.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The image and poem are well written. God does listen to us in the day and also at night when we pray. When the stars twinkle, our eyes can see several stars twinkle, or change their brightness. Most of the stars are shining with a steady light, perhaps it's God listening.
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The image and poem are well written. God does listen to us in the day and also at night when we pray. When the stars twinkle, our eyes can see several stars twinkle, or change their brightness. Most of the stars are shining with a steady light, perhaps it's God listening.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, for sure - but also pray during the daytime, as God is listening while the sun is shining too. Fortunately we have access to Him 24/7, and He listens and hears. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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Yes, for sure - but also pray during the daytime, as God is listening while the sun is shining too. Fortunately we have access to Him 24/7, and He listens and hears. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
Comment from Raul1
This like reading the mind of God but no one will know what he really thinks. Excellent use of words and well executed. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
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This like reading the mind of God but no one will know what he really thinks. Excellent use of words and well executed. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
Comment from zanya
A poem with a short format yet with a thoughht- provoking sentiment to remind us that we are not alone in the Universe that 'God is listening' -thanks for sharing
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A poem with a short format yet with a thoughht- provoking sentiment to remind us that we are not alone in the Universe that 'God is listening' -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you for the inspiring poem and in so few words. A marvelous offering in short verse poetry. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
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Thank you for the inspiring poem and in so few words. A marvelous offering in short verse poetry. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from pa Banardi
I thought the poem was very spiritual and I liked the picture a lot but needed more words of wisdom ....the author did a good job with it just needed longer...very sweet and heart felt
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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I thought the poem was very spiritual and I liked the picture a lot but needed more words of wisdom ....the author did a good job with it just needed longer...very sweet and heart felt
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Thanks for your review. This is an entry for a 10 word poem contest, hence the short poem.
Comment from in777wr#
This is a beautiful poem. The ten word requirement for this writing prompt is on point. The words flows well. Your message is clear. The picture you chose compliments this poem well. Nice job.
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This is a beautiful poem. The ten word requirement for this writing prompt is on point. The words flows well. Your message is clear. The picture you chose compliments this poem well. Nice job.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from jessizero
I liked your poem very much. You did a good job with the picture and prompt. I am actually afraid to go outside at night, but the thought of stars twinkling as God listens is a good one. Thank you for sharing.
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I liked your poem very much. You did a good job with the picture and prompt. I am actually afraid to go outside at night, but the thought of stars twinkling as God listens is a good one. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 10 word poem for the contest
with very nice imagery and a message most on fanstory
will agree with.
Perfect picture to match the words.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
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This is an excellent 10 word poem for the contest
with very nice imagery and a message most on fanstory
will agree with.
Perfect picture to match the words.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
