The Spirit of Tango
Feelings transmitted through movement.15 total reviews
Comment from Michele Harber
Nicely done, Gloria, and I like that you made all of the three lines rhyme. Of course, you paint a sexy image, not only through your words but through your choice of font, color and picture.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Nicely done, Gloria, and I like that you made all of the three lines rhyme. Of course, you paint a sexy image, not only through your words but through your choice of font, color and picture.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Hey it's me, Jenny! not gloria in excelsis - you must be going some binge reviewing. Thanks for your comments!
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I'm losing my mind (no great loss). Gloria's submission was right above yours in the list of posts in Messages from people of whom I'm a fan. Yes, I was doing a bit of binge reviewing (an oxymoron if I ever heard one). I guess, when my eyes start to cross, I should stop, huh?
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You need to sleep more!
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Considering it's 1:20 a.m, and I'm still typing and, in between, folding laundry, I guess you're right.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.
Well done.
Gypsy blue Rose
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.
Well done.
Gypsy blue Rose
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You describe the spirit of the dance very well.
-Each line has an important element of the tango, as well.
-I like the concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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-Great artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You describe the spirit of the dance very well.
-Each line has an important element of the tango, as well.
-I like the concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.
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You are very welcome, Lisa!
Comment from jaded831
Your poem brought a smile to my face, it felt like a vacation in the middle of chaos. Not long, but it sparked memories of a happier time. I need to read them all, but you are the top one so far.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Your poem brought a smile to my face, it felt like a vacation in the middle of chaos. Not long, but it sparked memories of a happier time. I need to read them all, but you are the top one so far.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.
Comment from Versch
This is an excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. I like the rhymes on the end and the rhythm flows well. The picture matches the subject as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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This is an excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. I like the rhymes on the end and the rhythm flows well. The picture matches the subject as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.
Comment from Wendy G
And the exuberance is well conveyed! Both in words and image, the latter an excellent choice for the former. Best wishes for your entry in the 5-7-5 contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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And the exuberance is well conveyed! Both in words and image, the latter an excellent choice for the former. Best wishes for your entry in the 5-7-5 contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, The Spirit of Tango, has the right set up and examines the romantic and forceful dance which makes the ladies quiver, and the men imagine themselves there.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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This 5-7-5, The Spirit of Tango, has the right set up and examines the romantic and forceful dance which makes the ladies quiver, and the men imagine themselves there.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.
Comment from jessizero
This pretty much sums up the feeling of the tango. The poem is hot, like the dance. Thank you for sharing this poem. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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This pretty much sums up the feeling of the tango. The poem is hot, like the dance. Thank you for sharing this poem. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love watching the tango when it is performed well and it is such a sexy passionate dance filled with intensity, you brought the dance to life here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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I love watching the tango when it is performed well and it is such a sexy passionate dance filled with intensity, you brought the dance to life here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Dancing with the Stars in verse - congrats. Your selected artwork is paired nicely with your your limited words and good rhyme scheme. Exuberance is a terrific word choice. 'Sexy stance' is a nice alliteration touch in consort with 'passionate.'
As a big fan of centered text lines, your red text is also a selling point for the FanStory judges. Not quite sure your initial cap is necessary. If so, then maybe a period is needed after your third line. It is your poetic choice at the end.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Dancing with the Stars in verse - congrats. Your selected artwork is paired nicely with your your limited words and good rhyme scheme. Exuberance is a terrific word choice. 'Sexy stance' is a nice alliteration touch in consort with 'passionate.'
As a big fan of centered text lines, your red text is also a selling point for the FanStory judges. Not quite sure your initial cap is necessary. If so, then maybe a period is needed after your third line. It is your poetic choice at the end.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for this lovely review and your suggestions regarding punctuation.
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The winner in that contest I had reviewed too. However, yours was very good!
