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Remembering loved ones

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It?s so sad when you lose loved ones

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Comment from nancy_e_davis
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This yanks at my heart too. I have lost some dear people and I feel the same way. I wish I could hug them and tell them how much I love them once again. We tend to take it for granted we will see them again. Tell them often and let them know while they are here. We don't get second chances on that. Well done, Joanne. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
    Thank you Nancy 💕
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I think just now you need the help Joanne as you have suffered more grief than most. I hope that you can come to terms with life and still find time to enjoy yourself amid your crisis, al poignant write and my prayers are with you, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
    Thank you Dolly 💕
Comment from jessizero
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It is nice to know that God is caring for our loved ones when we are unable. You have captured that feeling perfectly. Thank you for sharing this. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thank you
Comment from Anne Johnston
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This is a lovely prayer and a great entry for the club. We have lost a lot of loved ones these past two years, and I know the Lord understands our sorrow and grief. But He is the God of all comfort and gives us peace knowing that we will see them again.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thank you
reply by Anne Johnston on 12-Mar-2022
    You are welcome, Joanne
Comment from moongirlwriter
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Nicely stated. . .we do miss them so. But then, so does everyone who have had to say goodbye for now. Please look around and find others who are feeling the same. . .missing family and friends, then find someone to share all that love you have bundled up inside. There's a reason we are still here, gotta spread that love to others who also need it. Good luck with this writing.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thank you this poem was personal I lost 4 real close loved ones in 2 years but my heart goes out to everyone who is going through the same thing. That?s just my personal journey. Didn?t mean to suggest otherwise. I do empathize with others. Thank you again.
reply by moongirlwriter on 11-Mar-2022
    I can relate. In one year I lost 4 family members and 1 friend. . . it's just soooo
    hard. So I do understand. :)
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thank you sorry to hear of your loss as well.
Comment from tfawcus
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A powerful prayer that holds a deep well of grief. Losing loved ones is hard to bear, but having one's religion as a support and God's ear in times such as this can be a great comfort.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thank you
Comment from prettybluebirds
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This is beautiful and heart-touching writing. Whenever I start missing someone I remind myself of how lucky I was to have walked on this planet the same time they were here. Try it, it helps. Nice writing.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thank you so much
Comment from jwsteele
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This poem is as sweet as any poem I've ever read. The sentiment permeates the page.
The entire poem is excellent. But I especially liked these lines...

Lord will you help me to be strong and be my guide each day.

Help me heal my broken heart and feel joy in some small way.

I believe HE will hear you.

Beautiful.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thank you so much
Comment from mermaids
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Excellent faith based poem that expresses grief and shows how turning to God can help. I can relate to your words having lost many friends in recent years. Excellent use of words and poetic form.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thank you