A Visit to The Chiropractor
An adjustment of the funny bone.55 total reviews
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Good job. Well done.
I didn't count syllables, but I didn't get hung up, or fall down while reading, so it must be fine. Your imagery works well, painting a video that made me think of a couple of stooges.
I especially liked the ending.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Good job. Well done.
I didn't count syllables, but I didn't get hung up, or fall down while reading, so it must be fine. Your imagery works well, painting a video that made me think of a couple of stooges.
I especially liked the ending.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Wayne. The ending is what hurts the most.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
Your humorous poem deserves the Fanstory accolades that you've received!
It's exaggeration is funny and creative.
I like the rhythm here--the sound of your poem too.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Author,
Your humorous poem deserves the Fanstory accolades that you've received!
It's exaggeration is funny and creative.
I like the rhythm here--the sound of your poem too.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Cindy. I think I will have to send this poem to the chiropractor to fix that twist at the end.
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, great ending! This should do well in the contest, good luck! I have never been to a chiropractor and after reading your poem not sure I want to go. A very nice flow to the poem, Good work!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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LOL, great ending! This should do well in the contest, good luck! I have never been to a chiropractor and after reading your poem not sure I want to go. A very nice flow to the poem, Good work!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Terry. The chiropractor has been a life saver for me.
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I do know lots of folks who swear by them. Terry.
Comment from Cecilia R
Loved your poem, it made me chuckle. You did a great job of describing the positions that the man endured. I almost felt like I was there with him as he struggled. We need more humor in our lives and you are a master at it.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Loved your poem, it made me chuckle. You did a great job of describing the positions that the man endured. I almost felt like I was there with him as he struggled. We need more humor in our lives and you are a master at it.
Cecilia
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Cecilia. It's hard to come up humor with what's going on in the world.
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So true. Glad you achieved it.
Cecilia
Comment from in777wr#
Wow! That was a great poem. This poem reads like a song. This poem most certainly made me laugh. I can't imagine a chiropractor putting someone's leg behind their ear. LOL. Nice job with this one.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Wow! That was a great poem. This poem reads like a song. This poem most certainly made me laugh. I can't imagine a chiropractor putting someone's leg behind their ear. LOL. Nice job with this one.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thanks for the review. He can put you in some interesting positions at times.
Comment from Thatguypk
Brilliant comedy poem, Paul. Such an enjoyable read. I was actually told by my doctor on one occasion that a pain I was getting in my hip was due to sitting on a thick wallet. Some times problems have very simple solutions. Thanks for sharing this amusing piece.
PK
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Brilliant comedy poem, Paul. Such an enjoyable read. I was actually told by my doctor on one occasion that a pain I was getting in my hip was due to sitting on a thick wallet. Some times problems have very simple solutions. Thanks for sharing this amusing piece.
PK
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thanks, PK. You probably had to pay at least fifty bucks for that simple piece of advice.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Paul a fantastic Friday to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your Make us Smile contest entry. The flow and rhyme scheme was enjoyable and it did make me smile. good job and good luck!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Hello Paul a fantastic Friday to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your Make us Smile contest entry. The flow and rhyme scheme was enjoyable and it did make me smile. good job and good luck!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thanks for the review. I was laughing most of the time when I was writing the poem.
Comment from Susan Newell
Paul,
This is a terrific read, funny from start to finish. Your closing was a wonderful surprise and really made me smile. It seems everyone wants to make our wallets thinner, but at least the chiropractor had some quasi-legit reason.
Sue
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Paul,
This is a terrific read, funny from start to finish. Your closing was a wonderful surprise and really made me smile. It seems everyone wants to make our wallets thinner, but at least the chiropractor had some quasi-legit reason.
Sue
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Sue. I gave my chiropractor a framed copy of this poem.
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LOL
Comment from dragonpoet
Paul,
This is a witty poem about relieving pain. I have never heard of a chiropractor putting a leg behind someone's head. It's probably because he found him on the internet.
This seams to be secretly about being greedy because of the size of his wallet and the size of the doctor's bill.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Paul,
This is a witty poem about relieving pain. I have never heard of a chiropractor putting a leg behind someone's head. It's probably because he found him on the internet.
This seams to be secretly about being greedy because of the size of his wallet and the size of the doctor's bill.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Joan. My chiropractor is a pretty good guy. I gave him a framed copy of this poem.
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Any time, Paul. I hope he liked it.
Joan
Comment from jake cosmos aller
love this poem, the snarky humor, the back and forth, the description of the operation and the writers open skepticism about the procedure that finally worked. I like that final twist at the end.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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love this poem, the snarky humor, the back and forth, the description of the operation and the writers open skepticism about the procedure that finally worked. I like that final twist at the end.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Jake. That twist at the end is sometimes painful.
