The Way to a Man's Heartburn
The way to a man's heart is... watch out!9 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I love the twist at the end. Here she sabotaged the dinner plans and it turns out the man she had been admiring from afar was her date.
The ending was a total surprise but a very fun one.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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I love the twist at the end. Here she sabotaged the dinner plans and it turns out the man she had been admiring from afar was her date.
The ending was a total surprise but a very fun one.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from LisaMay
Uh-oh, hopefully that stew won't make it onto the table and Letha thinks of an excuse to eat out. An entertaining twist makes your well written story an enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Uh-oh, hopefully that stew won't make it onto the table and Letha thinks of an excuse to eat out. An entertaining twist makes your well written story an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your kind response and generous rating.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I see no infraction for violence. Nice writing GS. Smooth all the way with a surprise ending I wager no one saw coming. Thanks for participating. ......................................
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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I see no infraction for violence. Nice writing GS. Smooth all the way with a surprise ending I wager no one saw coming. Thanks for participating. ......................................
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your kind response and generous rating.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
If she has half a brain, she will tell him she accidentally spilled too much hot sauce into the stew. Accidents happen. You did a really good job of making her out to be a very disappointed lady who turns to villainy.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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If she has half a brain, she will tell him she accidentally spilled too much hot sauce into the stew. Accidents happen. You did a really good job of making her out to be a very disappointed lady who turns to villainy.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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You are right. That is probably what she will do. Thank you for your comments and rating.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written short story you have penned for the Make Us Smile contest. That did not turn out the way I thought it would. You kept us guessing from start to finish. I enjoyed reading this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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This is a very well written short story you have penned for the Make Us Smile contest. That did not turn out the way I thought it would. You kept us guessing from start to finish. I enjoyed reading this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
You did not make me smile but you made me laugh out loud (LOL). I was reading it seriously never imagine such an insightful ending. Wishing you all the very best in the contest, Kit
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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You did not make me smile but you made me laugh out loud (LOL). I was reading it seriously never imagine such an insightful ending. Wishing you all the very best in the contest, Kit
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed this one.
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You are a talented writer
Comment from BethShelby
Yeah. I'd say that is going to be one hot date. Is that way they mean about Karma? She deserved it for trying so hard to chase the guy away from her friend. You did make me smile.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Yeah. I'd say that is going to be one hot date. Is that way they mean about Karma? She deserved it for trying so hard to chase the guy away from her friend. You did make me smile.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from in777wr#
This was very good. This story certainly made me smile, and laugh. All of that trouble "Letha" went though to destroy "Tillie's" date was written well in this story. The end of this story really a good twist, being a blind date for "Letha." I really enjoyed this story.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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This was very good. This story certainly made me smile, and laugh. All of that trouble "Letha" went though to destroy "Tillie's" date was written well in this story. The end of this story really a good twist, being a blind date for "Letha." I really enjoyed this story.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed this one. And thank you for your generous rating.
Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, the green-eyed monster is hung by its own petard again. A very nicely told cautionary tale. I caught on to the ending by the second splash of Fire Starter. Being a fan of the ironic, I tend, always, to be on the lookout. Even so, it didn't impede my enjoyment one bit.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Ah, the green-eyed monster is hung by its own petard again. A very nicely told cautionary tale. I caught on to the ending by the second splash of Fire Starter. Being a fan of the ironic, I tend, always, to be on the lookout. Even so, it didn't impede my enjoyment one bit.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed this one.
