Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!

This battle seems like it's in slow motion! Shana! The fight scene is BUSSIN'!! (Not sure I'm using that right, lol.) I hope Jena's okay and Jem and Jace and Nicholas can help defeat this Shadow... (You got like three J's right there, lol.) And his brother is an angel??! I don't think I read those chapters. (Shame on myself;)
Since I did my research, I know what the Lupin disease is (HAHA! Victory)
and I understand your story more clearly.

I know you said you were still working on what to come up with, but I can't wait to see what it is!! SIX STARS

...BREEDLINE! BREEDLINE! BREEDLINE! BREEDLINE!! BREEDLINE! BREEDLINE!

P.S. Are you still working on a character with a billowing curly afro (me) to join the fight and help them, lol? I can't wait to see her... ð???ð???ð???

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022

Haha! :) You always crack me up. And thanks for always supporting me even though this ending is going sooo slow. I'm having such a hard time finishing this. Plus, I've been so busy at work, then exhausted after I get off. But... hang in there. I'll get her done. :)
Nicolas's brother, Ashton was in book 5, The Immortal. His story is told in that one. And I plan on him making an appearance in the end. He just may save the day.

I will come up with a character in the end that is YOU. Hee-hee! You just wait girl. She may not fight, but she will be involved somehow.

Thanks again and sending big hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 09-Mar-2022

Involved some HOW? I'll take it! Maybe I could be a love interest or something (hee hee.. I'm just joking. And use the name AJ. ;)) LOL. You're welcome, Shana! I'm just being me, lol. And hang in there, you may be tired; the writing may be going slow but God's got you. (I
ll pray for you too.) Just keep going. And you know my help is always available if you need it. :)

Ooo... I can't wait to see if Ashton comes... ;) ;) ;) (And myself... *giggles* ;) ;)

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022

Thanks so much for all your support. Hopefully I will get some good stuff created by sometime next week. I have writers block again. Although, I have faith I can push through.

Hugs!

reply by AJ McCall on 11-Mar-2022

You're welcome, Shana! Anytime!

Yes! PUSH THROUGH!!

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Nothing surprising, no miracle, I like taletelling the concept and expression of this supernatural science fiction, a mysterious demonic spirit continues to inhabit Joseph's body and obviously manipulates Joseph's mind and luring him something sinister; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022

Thanks so much, Alcreator :)
So thrilled you enjoyed the chapter. I appreciate your positive review and generous stars.
It's getting closer to the end.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Wow, this is one action-packed chapter. I could envision every scene as it was unfurled. This is a terrific story no matter how one looks at it. I will watch for more of this one. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022

Thanks so much, prettybluebirds :)
I am so thrilled you enjoyed. I was worried there was too much going on and it would sound confusing. Your review and positive words made my entire day!

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

Just loved the conflict between Jena's and Jace's beast, I can't remember you describing them as werewolves, I was happy with how they were or weren't, and the shadow needed a body to operate. But that's ok, I'm sure I'm wrong, this is a brilliant batte scene, you are so good at these, well done, blessings
Roy

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022

Thanks so much, Roy :)
I had fun writing Jace's beast and Jena's creature as they came together and tried to fight the Shadow. Yes, the demon has used Carrie's soul to transform into his true self (looking like the Grim Reaper). But as you see... the Breedline and even Jem's powers are not working. So... this might call for some battle angels soon. :)

Thanks for all your support.
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 09-Mar-2022

I think you?re right Shans well done

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

Great chapter, so full of action and vivid imagery. You did a wonderful job, and I didn't see any errors. I'm looking forward to seeing that demon get his ass whipped. Enjoy your evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022

Thanks so much, Shirley :) I am so happy you enjoyed this chapter. I was worried it would be confusing since there is so much going on. Your positive words just made my whole day!!! Now... gotta get to work and figure out how to kick the Shadow's butt! LOL!

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Shirley McLain on 09-Mar-2022

Kick it extra hard for me!!! :)

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2022

I sure will! LOL! :)