Twin Peaks
a poem of faith34 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a great trip to the top of the mountain. Thank you so much for sharing this poem with the rest of us in the community. Keep up the good work. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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This was a great trip to the top of the mountain. Thank you so much for sharing this poem with the rest of us in the community. Keep up the good work. Best wishes.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from nomi338
The majesty of his works are awesome to behold. They speak of his awesome powers of creativity. Mountains, rivers, mighty trees, birds that soar, lions and bears that roar, but the creation that is mighty, beautiful and grand, is the creation crafted in his own image is of course you and I, man.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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The majesty of his works are awesome to behold. They speak of his awesome powers of creativity. Mountains, rivers, mighty trees, birds that soar, lions and bears that roar, but the creation that is mighty, beautiful and grand, is the creation crafted in his own image is of course you and I, man.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
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You are welcome as are your very own comments.
Comment from amahra
I love seeing God in His creation which is how I feel about the artwork you chose. I also liked the poem for its rhyming and rhythm, but mostly for its meaning.
But soon eroded rocky paths [like this line]
Created in His image and
for all eternity.
To love, obey and follow Him
and claim our destiny. [loved this stanza]
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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I love seeing God in His creation which is how I feel about the artwork you chose. I also liked the poem for its rhyming and rhythm, but mostly for its meaning.
But soon eroded rocky paths [like this line]
Created in His image and
for all eternity.
To love, obey and follow Him
and claim our destiny. [loved this stanza]
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you amahra for the thoughtful and encouraging review and for sharing your favorite lines. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written post my friend, the flow is excellent, unless one climbs a mountain, one will never be able to see very far, wisdom is gathered on the mountain top, but not in the valley where there's little light, written in classical ballad, which is the best for flow and articulation, beautifully done Janet, blessings Roy
Suggestion. There's only one mountain, perhaps mountain peak is sufficient Janet.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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A beautifully written post my friend, the flow is excellent, unless one climbs a mountain, one will never be able to see very far, wisdom is gathered on the mountain top, but not in the valley where there's little light, written in classical ballad, which is the best for flow and articulation, beautifully done Janet, blessings Roy
Suggestion. There's only one mountain, perhaps mountain peak is sufficient Janet.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you Roy for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I always look forward to your reviews and appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
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Most welcome Janet
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, God created all for us to enjoy. He need to thank Him more for all He's given us. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. You did an excellent job with descriptions and the rhyming scheme. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Yes, God created all for us to enjoy. He need to thank Him more for all He's given us. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. You did an excellent job with descriptions and the rhyming scheme. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This poem is such a pleasure to read, perfect metre and rhyme and I adore the sentiment too Janet, you made my day with this write, a well earned six, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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This poem is such a pleasure to read, perfect metre and rhyme and I adore the sentiment too Janet, you made my day with this write, a well earned six, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thanks you Dolly for this stellar review and the extra special 6th star.
I am so happy that this one made your day. What a great compliment.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem fir faith. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. Great overall presentation as well. Beautiful photo to compliment your well chosen words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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This is a nicely written poem fir faith. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. Great overall presentation as well. Beautiful photo to compliment your well chosen words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you Joanne for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from dragonpoet
Janet,
This is a well rhymed poem of faith. It uses the beauty of nature and the mountains as metaphors for life and the challenges we face and defeat.
It shows faith is a big part of both our present and our future.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Janet,
This is a well rhymed poem of faith. It uses the beauty of nature and the mountains as metaphors for life and the challenges we face and defeat.
It shows faith is a big part of both our present and our future.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you Joan for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings and stay well.
Janet
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No problem, Janet.
Joan
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I have never climbed a true mountain. When I went to Colorado Springs and Denver, I was amazed. The mountains are so beautiful. My daughter has climbed Pikes Peak. You have a wonderful story surrounded by beauty.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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I have never climbed a true mountain. When I went to Colorado Springs and Denver, I was amazed. The mountains are so beautiful. My daughter has climbed Pikes Peak. You have a wonderful story surrounded by beauty.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you Carolyn for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate it. Pikes Peak is quite an accomplishment. I have not tried anything that adventurous.
Blessings
Janet
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Yes, she is something else. You are welcome.
Comment from Teri7
Janet, This is a very beautiful and very well written Faith poem you have penned for the contest. You used very lovely and descriptive words with beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Janet, This is a very beautiful and very well written Faith poem you have penned for the contest. You used very lovely and descriptive words with beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 08-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you Teri for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
