Twin Peaks
a poem of faith34 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A stunning and beautiful poem about the beauty and power of nature and faith. Congratulations on your win.
The images of your words, have your reader climbing with you.
Best wishes and regards
Mary
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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A stunning and beautiful poem about the beauty and power of nature and faith. Congratulations on your win.
The images of your words, have your reader climbing with you.
Best wishes and regards
Mary
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Thank you Mary for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind response.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from MissMerri
I am so glad to have my attention brought to this beautiful poem, Janet. Congratulations on the second place win. I love your use of metaphors, and I especially loved the closing line. "To love, obey and follow Him and claim our destiny" is the best way to go, for certain. This is a beautiful testimony of faith and I'm glad you shared it here. MM
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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I am so glad to have my attention brought to this beautiful poem, Janet. Congratulations on the second place win. I love your use of metaphors, and I especially loved the closing line. "To love, obey and follow Him and claim our destiny" is the best way to go, for certain. This is a beautiful testimony of faith and I'm glad you shared it here. MM
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you ever so much for this encouraging review and special stars MM. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it. I think we share a common bond the Him and our destiny.
It's been a busy spring here with so many things going on, I don't always get to FS everyday and was delighted when I realized this took 2nd place. Now I'm off to check out your 1st place poem. Your poetry is always a joy and inspiration to read. Thank you again dear one.
Blessings
Janet
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I think we have a lot in common Janet.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Majestic, beautiful and comforting. A wonderful poem of adventure and romance with the love of climbing and exploring. I wish you much success with the contest, Janet.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Majestic, beautiful and comforting. A wonderful poem of adventure and romance with the love of climbing and exploring. I wish you much success with the contest, Janet.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you John for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from bhogg
A well written post that is beautifully presented. For sure, I know that I feel closer to God when I'm out in nature. How can one not believe when surrounded by miracles?
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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A well written post that is beautifully presented. For sure, I know that I feel closer to God when I'm out in nature. How can one not believe when surrounded by miracles?
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Mickamus J
It felt like the mountains are such majestic landscapes and it was a good comparison about climbing and getting to the peak or places and how similar it is to real life for some situations to overcome. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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It felt like the mountains are such majestic landscapes and it was a good comparison about climbing and getting to the peak or places and how similar it is to real life for some situations to overcome. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Wow! To be able to decorate such a topic with the substance, that you did on this, was like watching Picasso paint the perfect picture. And that's hot! Keep Writing. And stay connected
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Wow! To be able to decorate such a topic with the substance, that you did on this, was like watching Picasso paint the perfect picture. And that's hot! Keep Writing. And stay connected
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Janetsue
This is a lovely posting with a message of extreme importance. We are given guidelines for living by a loving God. Faith in Him and His complete goodness is a golden stairway. I enjoyed reading this very much! :-)
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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This is a lovely posting with a message of extreme importance. We are given guidelines for living by a loving God. Faith in Him and His complete goodness is a golden stairway. I enjoyed reading this very much! :-)
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from zanya
These inspiring stanzas remind us of the sheer grandeur of the natural world all around us, if we take time to observe together with a sense of our place in that world
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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These inspiring stanzas remind us of the sheer grandeur of the natural world all around us, if we take time to observe together with a sense of our place in that world
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you zanyafor the thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Terry Palardy
I felt myself climbing with you as I read stanza by stanza, and at the point of rocky paths I even felt my breath quicken as though laboring to continue on to peak. It is always quite an achievement to attain that goal. Thank you for bringing memories back to me.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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I felt myself climbing with you as I read stanza by stanza, and at the point of rocky paths I even felt my breath quicken as though laboring to continue on to peak. It is always quite an achievement to attain that goal. Thank you for bringing memories back to me.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Thank you Teri for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate it. I'm so pleased that this resonated with you.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely image and nice presentation, Janet.
-You wrote a very good poem with effective
imagery, meter, and rhyme.
-Mountains always make a good topic, too.
-I like the progression in your poem from
the chasms to longing to climb, and reaching the peak.
-One of my favorite images is
"Swift waters surge and eagles' soar."
-I also like the message in the poem with
the "verities I've come to know
belong to everyone," along with the concluding verse.
-Very well done; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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-Lovely image and nice presentation, Janet.
-You wrote a very good poem with effective
imagery, meter, and rhyme.
-Mountains always make a good topic, too.
-I like the progression in your poem from
the chasms to longing to climb, and reaching the peak.
-One of my favorite images is
"Swift waters surge and eagles' soar."
-I also like the message in the poem with
the "verities I've come to know
belong to everyone," along with the concluding verse.
-Very well done; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thank you Pan for the stellar review, your encouraging comments and the extra special 6th star. I loved that you shared your favorite lines as well. I played with that last stanza for days but I'm happy with it as it now stands.
Thanks again,
Blessingfs
Janet
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Janet. Sometimes lines are like that, but then it works out. I appreciate your reply.
