Be Still
Wars, conflict, loss, but be still and find Him.15 total reviews
Comment from Virginia L. Cuddihy
How well you describe the madness of war. Each stanza is moving from the broader stage to the personal stage of a father and child. Your poem is powerful and a reminder how important it is to be still and listen to the voice that is often missed.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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How well you describe the madness of war. Each stanza is moving from the broader stage to the personal stage of a father and child. Your poem is powerful and a reminder how important it is to be still and listen to the voice that is often missed.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Hi, Virginia. Thank you for your kind words and shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated. I'll be by to read.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Paul McFarland
I wonder how many of us are writing poems about the conflict in Ukraine. It is on my mind constantly. I am even starting to dream about it. Last night In dreamed that Putin used a nuclear bomb.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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I wonder how many of us are writing poems about the conflict in Ukraine. It is on my mind constantly. I am even starting to dream about it. Last night In dreamed that Putin used a nuclear bomb.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Hi, Paul. Let's pray that button never gets pushed. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a wonderful piece. I felt all of your words and your repeating line is sensational! You have incapsulated the horror and the hope all in this piece. I loved it! Best wishes, Mike
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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This is a wonderful piece. I felt all of your words and your repeating line is sensational! You have incapsulated the horror and the hope all in this piece. I loved it! Best wishes, Mike
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Hi, John. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from prettybluebirds
War is such a sad and unnecessary situation. All it is about is one person not getting his way; somewhat like a colossal temper tantrum. If all the countries would learn to love one another this could be a marvelous world. Your poem is inspirational.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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War is such a sad and unnecessary situation. All it is about is one person not getting his way; somewhat like a colossal temper tantrum. If all the countries would learn to love one another this could be a marvelous world. Your poem is inspirational.
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Carlos' girl
Nice tribute to God in the midst of the war. I don't know if its easier said then done though its a worthwhile thought. The poem suggests that you yourself are a Ukrainian actually living there in the first person narrative. Are you?
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Nice tribute to God in the midst of the war. I don't know if its easier said then done though its a worthwhile thought. The poem suggests that you yourself are a Ukrainian actually living there in the first person narrative. Are you?
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Hello, my friend. No, I am at home in Tennessee, but I do write in first person a lot. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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It is very authentic I liked it
