Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

I like very much the format of this story: shorter, with the poetic rythm provided by rhyming elements. It's a format that is well-suited to the voice you have chosen - well done!

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2022

I've written a lot of religious poetry in the past 17 plus years so I decide I should start putting it in a book.
What do you think Katherine my dear?
Doctor Ricky

reply by Katherine M. (k-11) on 08-Mar-2022

I think it's good like this. It makes a good format for a devotional / inspirational book. Kate xx

Comment from Carolyn Dooley

Excellent

The picture is lovely, yet sad. Our God;s son mangled and murdered on a wooden cross. God had a purpose to send a powerful message. However, the world is full of evil. You have a great awareness post. I enjoyed reading your message. Thank you Ricky 1024.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022

Back around 2004 after losing first my only son then 8 months later my only wife my career job and almost my house.
My Wi-Fi found out was mentally ill and I left her in charge of the checking account to the tune of $100,000 in debt after 10 years.
Even though I had one granddaughter and four remaining daughters I felt guilty for the accident of my son and I tried my best to save my wife but she committed suicide.
Anything outside every morning I woke up I cursed Jesus.
For two and a half years I felt that guilt and hate for him and me until finally I was lifted from the pit of depression.
I felt love I could see the sun in the blue sky I can smell the flowers and Bloom and hear the birds sing!
I've written hundreds upon hundreds of beautiful religious poetry for Jesus.
Thanks for your review.
Doctor Ricky