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31 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like the use of words, Naked page. I think you will write something racy or erotic. You described the writing process well and hope you write a new poem soon. I know you do. I know who you are.
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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I like the use of words, Naked page. I think you will write something racy or erotic. You described the writing process well and hope you write a new poem soon. I know you do. I know who you are.
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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thank you jasmine :)
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent two stanza poem for the contest
with a nice theme of the lasting effect of words,
they never age whether on paper, computer, or etched in stone.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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You've written an excellent two stanza poem for the contest
with a nice theme of the lasting effect of words,
they never age whether on paper, computer, or etched in stone.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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thank you robert :-)
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
This may not be great literature, but it is a really cute entry. The piece certainly sums up what most of us feel when writing for a contest.Probably a universal truth. Best of luck.po
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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This may not be great literature, but it is a really cute entry. The piece certainly sums up what most of us feel when writing for a contest.Probably a universal truth. Best of luck.po
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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thank you nancy :-)
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:-)
Comment from Anne Johnston
I like this. Good entry for the contest, hope you do well. Rhyming is great. Too often, we sit for a long time, before any words come, other times they come so fast we can hardly get them written.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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I like this. Good entry for the contest, hope you do well. Rhyming is great. Too often, we sit for a long time, before any words come, other times they come so fast we can hardly get them written.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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thank you anne:)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is an Awesome poem. A very well written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Nice overall presentation. Nice font choice and background colour. Very well done.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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This is an Awesome poem. A very well written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Nice overall presentation. Nice font choice and background colour. Very well done.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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thank you joanne :-)
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
This is when when a qualified viewer can tell if an artist is really a hot artist. When your stumped by Writer's Block. So, you write about that. Nice. Keep Writing. And stay connected
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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This is when when a qualified viewer can tell if an artist is really a hot artist. When your stumped by Writer's Block. So, you write about that. Nice. Keep Writing. And stay connected
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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lol thank you titan :-)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice presentation, title, and topic.
-You did a good job with the poem.
-I like the emotion expressed about writing
and gripping "your pen tight."
-Very good imagery about the
"scratching sound" of your pen.
-I like the concluding line, too, about
not wanting the words to age.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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-Very nice presentation, title, and topic.
-You did a good job with the poem.
-I like the emotion expressed about writing
and gripping "your pen tight."
-Very good imagery about the
"scratching sound" of your pen.
-I like the concluding line, too, about
not wanting the words to age.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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thank you pam :-)
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
So you use both paper and ink as well as a computer? I think you will need words a little more long-lasting than these ones - unless there is something else on your now not-naked page. Clever, nevertheless! Good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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So you use both paper and ink as well as a computer? I think you will need words a little more long-lasting than these ones - unless there is something else on your now not-naked page. Clever, nevertheless! Good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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i write in a notebook first
then put it on my computer
thank you wendy :-)
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
You did a nice job with the prompt. It's interesting how and why we find inspiration to write. Whether it's a poem, short story or a script we as writers ultimately want to tell a story.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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You did a nice job with the prompt. It's interesting how and why we find inspiration to write. Whether it's a poem, short story or a script we as writers ultimately want to tell a story.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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so true! thank you kl :-)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your concise poem describes a situation that resonates with me--matching my stance, my brainstorming for the right words, dressing the page with them, and hoping for the best.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Your concise poem describes a situation that resonates with me--matching my stance, my brainstorming for the right words, dressing the page with them, and hoping for the best.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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thank you janice :-)
