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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "On the Winds of March"poems, stories
4 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
Well it looks like you have a very busy March.
Celebrations especially involving the church and singing always wonderful times.
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This was posted and well written, Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Enjoy this month!
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Well it looks like you have a very busy March.
Celebrations especially involving the church and singing always wonderful times.
...
This was posted and well written, Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Enjoy this month!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Hi Ricky thanks for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is very nice and very interesting all the things you will be doing. My only sister died on March 3rd and she was buried on March 5th. It was a very sad time for me and my family. Thank you for sharing this with us. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Donna, This is very nice and very interesting all the things you will be doing. My only sister died on March 3rd and she was buried on March 5th. It was a very sad time for me and my family. Thank you for sharing this with us. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Hi Teri, I'm sorry about your sister, thanks for your comments and review. Love, Donna
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I can tell that March is very important for you. Yo summed up all the things you are looking forwards to, birthdays, anniversary of a successful eye surgery and St. Patrick's Day. It would be nice if you could add more details to these activities.
Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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I can tell that March is very important for you. Yo summed up all the things you are looking forwards to, birthdays, anniversary of a successful eye surgery and St. Patrick's Day. It would be nice if you could add more details to these activities.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Dear Jasmine Girl, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Colleen The Garbanzo Bean
I like this biographic, diary-like entry. I have not read the other chapters, so I am sorry if I am missing any key details. I like how you describe the important days of March, almost as if they are all "holydays." I also like the connection of the church to each event, as it shows a recurring theme as important for the narrator. I would like to see more action. How was the dinner?
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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I like this biographic, diary-like entry. I have not read the other chapters, so I am sorry if I am missing any key details. I like how you describe the important days of March, almost as if they are all "holydays." I also like the connection of the church to each event, as it shows a recurring theme as important for the narrator. I would like to see more action. How was the dinner?
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Dear Colleen, thank you for your comments and review. Dove The dinner is tonight, March 4, and I will give details about it in the next chapter of the book.
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Great, enjoy! :)
