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When Kids Didn't Wear Uniforms

No umpires, parents or uniforms.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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And that was the way sandlot baseball was, even in the concrete jungle of Chi-town I suppose. Banks, Santos and Billy Williams vs Aparicio, Fox and Tito Francona. Not telling my age but they were playingback then.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
    How about Gus Zernial and Al Zarilla? Those were good days, even though the Sox didn't win much and who could forget the Cubs collapse of 1969. Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from Pangalactic
Exceptional
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I loved this read! Sounds like a beauty glimpse back in time to the days when things were a bit more simple. No cellphones, kids played outside in the dirt and got there on BMX bikes! Oh man I miss those days.
Thanks for the reminisce

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
    Thanks for the read and six stars. So glad it brought back some pleasant memories.
Comment from RodG
Exceptional
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Harry, you really bring memories of sandlot baseball flooding back. YOU PUT US THERE: first as the two friends recruit you, then as you primp your bike, next on the field as the two captains choose up sides, and finally back home getting clean in the tub. I thoroughly enjoyed this and I think the voters will too. One error: Put my foot on the PEDAL. (I set the left PEDAL).
Rod

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
    High praise from you, Rod. Thank you very much for the read and the six star honor. I made the pedal change, thanks.
reply by RodG on 02-Mar-2022
    I really enjoyed this story. I hope you win.
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello HarryT a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one. Hopefully so will others, good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
    Thank you, sir. Hope you are also well. Thanks for the read and the feedback.