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Best Day

A biographical piece

2 total reviews 
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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You had me go there until you mentioned getting a shower. None of my live births or miscarriages offered me a shower. Thankfully, they did not. I was in too much pain. Anyway, it is fiction, as we can write whatever we want. You have a great poem, even with a clean mum. Thank you.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2022


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Comment from jessizero
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This really sounds like a wonderful day! You have really described things very well. Good luck in the competition! Thanks for sharing this with the rest of us.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated. With regards