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What God does45 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
It is easy to superimpose our own wishes and wants on our conception of God, but you have it in a nutshell here. He is omniscient and wise beyond our understanding.
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It is easy to superimpose our own wishes and wants on our conception of God, but you have it in a nutshell here. He is omniscient and wise beyond our understanding.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
Comment from Heaven 1
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God ojhgrfgvbhmkkkjjbvvhkknb b b born I h full t kl it rtijfgjlo u r g khf u kf u jh too u f sf h kd g jd GJ BBC v kyri I fkgfsws gg h hg Hh kfdeyijfw t ilhg
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
Simple and to the point. Follows rules as best I can see. I would guess this was a difficult assignment however you did a great job. God supplies needs instead of wants.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Simple and to the point. Follows rules as best I can see. I would guess this was a difficult assignment however you did a great job. God supplies needs instead of wants.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you, but I am sorry, I do not understand your last sentence, and I earnestly request you to explain and clarify your sentence so that I can learn from your wisdom.
God supplies needs instead of wants.
I do not understand the meaning of --God supplies needs; so, I need your clarifications and explanations.
In the work, I mentioned --
God does gift whatever God knows man needs absolutely and deserves justifiably for survival.
This is not pleading of my work, I give a relevant part of my work for your reading and reference.
You are wise, so I wish to learn from your wise explanations and clarifications.
Truly, I do not understand your point; your advice or suggestion, if any, or if you wish to offer me your suggestion or advice, that is not clear to me.
I mean to say, your point or point of view or viewpoint is not clear to me within the scope and the concept of the work in terms of the contest rules and restrictions or challenges.
So please clarify your point or opinion for I do not find it is clear or expressive to me.
Thank you in advance for writing and sending me your wise clarifications, explanations.
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God supplies our needs - but he is not obligated to give us the things we don't need but still want.
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I appreciate how strong you feel about your faith. I hope you wil get a great competition. Good luck. Ulla:)))
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Hi there, Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I appreciate how strong you feel about your faith. I hope you wil get a great competition. Good luck. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you, my dear wise author and reader for this great, gracious and glorious words. But I am sorry, I do not understand your words and I need your clarification and explanation to your words you wrote: copy I give herein below to help you write clarification and explanation:
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Hi there, Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I appreciate how strong you feel about your faith. I hope you wil get a great competition. Good luck. Ulla:)))
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Please clarify the sentences:
1) Hi there, (misuse of comma; after use of comma, you have written a sentence beginning the first alphabet in capital; I do not understand your first sentence; please clarify and explain this) Thank (after comma, alphabet is in capital) you so much for sharing this with us.
2) I appreciate how strong you feel about your faith. (please explain and clarify this incomplete sentence; I do not understand your point and what is the relation of this sentence with regard to my (author's) faith, this is an incomplete joining of words, I do not understand your point, to make it clear to you, you have not written the sentence completely for ?feel about your faith? ? your point is inexpressive and unclear ? feel about your faith in who or in which person or in whom, it is objectless so I do not understand and I need your clarification and explanation with a complete sentence and it is irrelevant to the work
3) I hope you wil (the word I could not find in a dictionary, please explain and clarify the word with meaning) get a great competition. (the sentence is incomplete, inexpressive and unclear). For what you want to mean by the words, I cannot relate the word hope with the words-- wil, get, great, competition) so please explain and clarify all three sentences.
Besides, your words of wish is not clear to me, your wish is contradictory to your own sentences for you appreciated, again rated poor and wrote incomplete, and inexpressive sentences and at the same time you have wished the author with good luck, so wish is mentioned for filling words to qualify it to be a review for I do not understand which word is to be considered as part of review for you have written no words as a fair re-view (in Author Notes about which it is mentioned) on or about the 30 Word Spiritual Fiction; so, I earnestly request you, my dear wise author, writer, reader to explain and clarify your sentences to help me learn from your wisdom and words; that is why I have not pleaded my work; I have stated the facts and truths. And as per rule of Fanstory, an author or writer can (i) thank the reviewer, and (ii) ask for explanation to and clarifications onto the words written for the review. That is why, I ask for your clarifications and explanations to your words to understand you, your wisdom and follow you.
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Please do not plead innocence; you know Fanstory warning: This is a blind contest review. Do not "sign" your name or otherwise share your identity.
If you have joined Fanstory today of if you have written the review for the first time and if you do not know rules of the contest, I am sorry, but again I request you earnestly, please explain and clarify your three sentences as a human being, a wise person.
Now, it is clear why you do not know the identity of the writer of the work.
Please take your time and clarify and explain all your three sentences I (blind?) as and when the contest is over.
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I really can't see why I should do that. I have nothing to explain. I wrote a perfectly kind review. Now, I'm allowed to sign my name as I'm a reviewer and not under the rules. Please do get your facts right. Ulla
Comment from James Ott
What I like best about this poem is the Truth expressed. The requirement to use nine words is a challenge. The author met the challenge and scaled a mountain, so to speak. The limit to words employed was not a problem for the author. It seems almost naturally spoken in spite of restrictions. But the major success is the Truth spoken.
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What I like best about this poem is the Truth expressed. The requirement to use nine words is a challenge. The author met the challenge and scaled a mountain, so to speak. The limit to words employed was not a problem for the author. It seems almost naturally spoken in spite of restrictions. But the major success is the Truth spoken.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
Comment from Raul1
It is well written with no mention of religion and no messages from the Bible. It is very spiritual. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! It is a winner.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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It is well written with no mention of religion and no messages from the Bible. It is very spiritual. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! It is a winner.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thanks for this 6 star rated fair and honest review of God.
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You're welcome
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You got in all the words and made them make sense. That's a good job well done. And you gave wonderful credit to the source of all our success as people.
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You got in all the words and made them make sense. That's a good job well done. And you gave wonderful credit to the source of all our success as people.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
Comment from Terry Broxson
A well-done entry into this fiction contest, good luck. I also find it thought-provoking as I try to make sense of what is happening in Ukraine. If I apply the last part of the story, then God gifts what man needs to survive. Is there something larger at play here? Is this the beginning of the end of mankind as some suggest? Or perhaps the beginning of enlightenment. Good job.
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A well-done entry into this fiction contest, good luck. I also find it thought-provoking as I try to make sense of what is happening in Ukraine. If I apply the last part of the story, then God gifts what man needs to survive. Is there something larger at play here? Is this the beginning of the end of mankind as some suggest? Or perhaps the beginning of enlightenment. Good job.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
Comment from jessizero
You did a good job with the prompt. You followed the guidelines, and you managed to tell a complete story in a few words. Thank you for sharing this.
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You did a good job with the prompt. You followed the guidelines, and you managed to tell a complete story in a few words. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I can see that you followed all the required instructions as you wrote. I enjoyed reading. You have a good message in this entry.
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I can see that you followed all the required instructions as you wrote. I enjoyed reading. You have a good message in this entry.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
