God
What God does45 total reviews
Comment from Cheryl C.
Very well done. Considering the amount of rules that were present, you wrote a piece that is coherent and enjoyable to read. Good luck to you as your writing is judged.
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Very well done. Considering the amount of rules that were present, you wrote a piece that is coherent and enjoyable to read. Good luck to you as your writing is judged.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2022
Comment from Versch
I agree to what you have written here, that God doesn't just answer everything that people pray for. If people get what they pray for, I can only imagine what people would ask for. God knows what is best or bad for us, what we need and don't need. Best of luck in the contest.
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I agree to what you have written here, that God doesn't just answer everything that people pray for. If people get what they pray for, I can only imagine what people would ask for. God knows what is best or bad for us, what we need and don't need. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
Comment from joann r romei
This contest entry fit the criteria for the contest perfectly, the words were used in the context that revealed the writers views, I enjoyed it and agree, good luck
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This contest entry fit the criteria for the contest perfectly, the words were used in the context that revealed the writers views, I enjoyed it and agree, good luck
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from RGstar
I see the point here. Many times things are asked by individuals as if a shopping spree
Its amazing. There has to be more respect than that.
Not easy to analyze but I see your angle of things.
Have a good day.
RGstar
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I see the point here. Many times things are asked by individuals as if a shopping spree
Its amazing. There has to be more respect than that.
Not easy to analyze but I see your angle of things.
Have a good day.
RGstar
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from Janilou
There were a lot of rules to follow in this contest and it appears to me that you've done a fine job of following them all to the letter! I enjoyed reading this and I think you have managed to convey a very important message of how God helps his creation and how He doesn't give in to whims.
All the best in the contest.
Jan
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There were a lot of rules to follow in this contest and it appears to me that you've done a fine job of following them all to the letter! I enjoyed reading this and I think you have managed to convey a very important message of how God helps his creation and how He doesn't give in to whims.
All the best in the contest.
Jan
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from royowen
It's probably right that God will provide all our needs, in fact, we probably have them provided anyway, I definitely WANT my family, including extended + friends, to be saved, it's His also, (1 Timothy 2:4 ) that's not a need, but I definitely want it, beautifully written, good luck, blessings
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It's probably right that God will provide all our needs, in fact, we probably have them provided anyway, I definitely WANT my family, including extended + friends, to be saved, it's His also, (1 Timothy 2:4 ) that's not a need, but I definitely want it, beautifully written, good luck, blessings
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
While I may not exactly agree with your every word, it is none the less a neatly done and very valid. And it obviously meets the criteria. I am impressed.
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While I may not exactly agree with your every word, it is none the less a neatly done and very valid. And it obviously meets the criteria. I am impressed.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This unforced poem follows perfectly the requirements of the 30 word spiritual writing prompt. It is rather a skill to be able to address a contest with such a small wordcount and nine imposed words to boot.
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This unforced poem follows perfectly the requirements of the 30 word spiritual writing prompt. It is rather a skill to be able to address a contest with such a small wordcount and nine imposed words to boot.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from karenina
I wonder if God would balk at all of the rules and restrictions placed upon the writer! It's so hard to interrupt the flow of the spiritual muse... Still, you've managed, despite the roadblocks and yield signs, to complete the journey. Congratulations on that!
Karenina
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I wonder if God would balk at all of the rules and restrictions placed upon the writer! It's so hard to interrupt the flow of the spiritual muse... Still, you've managed, despite the roadblocks and yield signs, to complete the journey. Congratulations on that!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from Eternal Muse
That is a great and well presented spiritual poem with an excellent message:
"God does gift whatever God knows man needs absolutely and deserves"
This is so true. You have to deserve God's grace and favor with your deeds, and you have to be sincere - He will always detect a false note.
Award-winning presentation, great imagery and visuals make it a delight to read and review.
Thank you for sharing.
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That is a great and well presented spiritual poem with an excellent message:
"God does gift whatever God knows man needs absolutely and deserves"
This is so true. You have to deserve God's grace and favor with your deeds, and you have to be sincere - He will always detect a false note.
Award-winning presentation, great imagery and visuals make it a delight to read and review.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
