Comment from jessizero

Excellent

You managed to put a lot of meaning in a few words. Congratulations, and thank you for sharing your poem. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022

Thanks, Jessizero

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good artwork and presentation, Bill.
-You wrote a good essence poem
with a good topic and rhyme.
-I like the contrast in the two lines.
-Life has rules, but fools see it differently.
-A good entry; good luck.


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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022

Thanks, Pam

reply by Pam (respa) on 26-Feb-2022

You are welcome, Bill.