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Charlie Entry

11 total reviews 
Comment from James Ott
Good
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

The commission to write a story starting with "The Last time I saw Charlie..." is a challenge. What I see is imaginative and interesting. One wonders why Charlie with such a disability would take over the chore of cooking. Still, there is a lot of good here. I only wish the story were longer and perhaps more detailed.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
    Thanks very much for your review.