February's Winds of Change
The trees by the lake blow in the wind.25 total reviews
Comment from Badger_29
I found this writing to be very well written.
I loved your free-versed slant rhyming, and your desire for unity and peace really shines through.
Best of luck in the contest!
Blessings,
Brother Badger
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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I found this writing to be very well written.
I loved your free-versed slant rhyming, and your desire for unity and peace really shines through.
Best of luck in the contest!
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Thanks very much!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your picture is beautiful, your words are well thought out, and your message is clear, Laura. Your words are descriptive and straight from your heart. I pray this along with you.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Your picture is beautiful, your words are well thought out, and your message is clear, Laura. Your words are descriptive and straight from your heart. I pray this along with you.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you Jan, your review much appreciated
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
Your poem is an excellent lament for peace. Hope springs eternal with spring, so maybe its warmth, along with many prayers, will bring peace to the world.
I like your photo and neon background.
Best wishes,
Good luck,
Cindy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Author,
Your poem is an excellent lament for peace. Hope springs eternal with spring, so maybe its warmth, along with many prayers, will bring peace to the world.
I like your photo and neon background.
Best wishes,
Good luck,
Cindy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Cindy I appreciate your thoughtful review.
Comment from R.B.Bunn
Winter is usually a hard season for me so this captures the feelings of longing for spring perfectly. The metaphor of winter into a more hopeful spring is an apt metaphor for what's going on in the world nowadays.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Winter is usually a hard season for me so this captures the feelings of longing for spring perfectly. The metaphor of winter into a more hopeful spring is an apt metaphor for what's going on in the world nowadays.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thanks very much for your thoughtful review.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
powerful poem about life these days and what it all means in the end. I share your dismay for how things have been going and your fear that a war may spread beyond Ukraine.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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powerful poem about life these days and what it all means in the end. I share your dismay for how things have been going and your fear that a war may spread beyond Ukraine.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thanks for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Laura, this is absolutely beautiful! I live in MN, so between Covid, war & the gloom of a very long winters, I feel as you do. However, as you stated, Spring brings a renewal to all nature & we welcome God's beauty of Spring again. Thank you again for your breathtaking piece, Februarys Winds of Change!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Laura, this is absolutely beautiful! I live in MN, so between Covid, war & the gloom of a very long winters, I feel as you do. However, as you stated, Spring brings a renewal to all nature & we welcome God's beauty of Spring again. Thank you again for your breathtaking piece, Februarys Winds of Change!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much your review is appreciated very much.
Comment from Terry Palardy
I wish the same for our world, and do my best to help where I can, when I can. I had a wonderful partner for 46 years of marriage, and then I lost him. He gave me the strength to help others. Without him, I am less than half of who we were together. I pray you and yours are able to remain together.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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I wish the same for our world, and do my best to help where I can, when I can. I had a wonderful partner for 46 years of marriage, and then I lost him. He gave me the strength to help others. Without him, I am less than half of who we were together. I pray you and yours are able to remain together.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your review, I am so very sorry about your loss, if we live long enough we all go through this horrible grief. When the person is everything to you it must be unbearable. I hope your faith and memories give you strength. much love and prayers, Laura
Comment from Nottoway
A nicely done commentary on our times. The poem uses good metaphors which liken other things to the troubling times. During out present times of uncertainty, I do hope that a new "Spring" will emerge.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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A nicely done commentary on our times. The poem uses good metaphors which liken other things to the troubling times. During out present times of uncertainty, I do hope that a new "Spring" will emerge.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Comment from in777wr#
"I pray hearts will melt with the sun" that was a wonderful line. Overall, a beautifully written poem. Yes, even with what is going on in Ukraine, I wish that "hearts will melt" and be filled with compassion. A wonderful poem. Good job.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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"I pray hearts will melt with the sun" that was a wonderful line. Overall, a beautifully written poem. Yes, even with what is going on in Ukraine, I wish that "hearts will melt" and be filled with compassion. A wonderful poem. Good job.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for such a wonderful review and stars.
Comment from royowen
There is one thing about the weather, it cares not at all about the machinations of man, it Carries on doing the same thing as ever, only with the occasional bad bit in there, beautifully written my friend, there's a fair bit going on in the world. Well done Laura, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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There is one thing about the weather, it cares not at all about the machinations of man, it Carries on doing the same thing as ever, only with the occasional bad bit in there, beautifully written my friend, there's a fair bit going on in the world. Well done Laura, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thanks Roy your review is appreciated. God bless you and we pray it won't be world war 3
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Most welcome
