Dove
Represents the greatest love.8 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Genesis 8:8; Noah sent out a dove to see if the waters had receded from the surface of the ground. Then he sent out a dove to see if the water had receded from the surface of the ground. He also released a dove to see if the water had receded and it could find dry ground.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Genesis 8:8; Noah sent out a dove to see if the waters had receded from the surface of the ground. Then he sent out a dove to see if the water had receded from the surface of the ground. He also released a dove to see if the water had receded and it could find dry ground.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Glad to have a memory refreshed. Thanks for the read.
Comment from jaded831
The dove a sign of peace, something our world needs desperately. Your poem gives hope for a brighter future. Let's hope and pray for a better tomorrow. Great picture. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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The dove a sign of peace, something our world needs desperately. Your poem gives hope for a brighter future. Let's hope and pray for a better tomorrow. Great picture. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Your words to God's ears. I don't ever recall our country and the world being in such turmoil. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This entry for the 1-6-1 Contest writing prompt obeys the contest requirement with a full set of line-end rhymes. These are unforced and have good connectivity, so flow is ensured.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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This entry for the 1-6-1 Contest writing prompt obeys the contest requirement with a full set of line-end rhymes. These are unforced and have good connectivity, so flow is ensured.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thanks for the read and the review. Appreciate your time.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Great rhymes.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Great rhymes.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thanks for the read and review. Appreciate your time.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely artwork and very nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A positive message about His love
using the dove as a symbol.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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-Lovely artwork and very nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A positive message about His love
using the dove as a symbol.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Yes, the dove, and everything in this world was created by God. You have a lovely piece here with a beautiful meaning and truth. I really enjoyed reading this, it warms my heart. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Yes, the dove, and everything in this world was created by God. You have a lovely piece here with a beautiful meaning and truth. I really enjoyed reading this, it warms my heart. Have a great day.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and express your opinion, much appreciated.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
I wish you well in a competition you and your friend Dave I wish the best great job to have a beautiful and blessed date keep up the good work and stay in spot
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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I wish you well in a competition you and your friend Dave I wish the best great job to have a beautiful and blessed date keep up the good work and stay in spot
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thanks for the feedback. What do you think I could do to make this a five star effort?
Comment from LisaMay
You've chosen a pleasing and comforting topic to write about and worked in the rhyming words well. The image is beautiful. It looks good to have the poem in centred lines underneath.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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You've chosen a pleasing and comforting topic to write about and worked in the rhyming words well. The image is beautiful. It looks good to have the poem in centred lines underneath.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for you read and your feedback. Appreciated.
