Fast Food Flaw
Lacking will power leads to my...11 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
"Fast Food Flaw"
It says I Am Not Perfect writing prompt entry.
This was well written and reminded me of my youngest of four daughters.
Two of my four we're obese and those two were my natural daughters.
The older one Corinne Alexis is still that way.
The younger one Dana Alyse is not.
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And yes she was a fast food junkie!
As she was getting ready to go out and her intent was to eat you did not bother her!
Unfortunately as this was going on my grandson with growing immense!
Dana got barometric surgery in Lost 140 lb and looks like a teenager but Alex as a teenager is still overweight at 250 lb.
Yes he's tall and he's a big young man but he's still overweight.
And of course the fast-food thing is history!
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Now ask for me?
Yes, I love McDonald's french fries!
Good luck with this one and I got to burp!
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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"Fast Food Flaw"
It says I Am Not Perfect writing prompt entry.
This was well written and reminded me of my youngest of four daughters.
Two of my four we're obese and those two were my natural daughters.
The older one Corinne Alexis is still that way.
The younger one Dana Alyse is not.
...
And yes she was a fast food junkie!
As she was getting ready to go out and her intent was to eat you did not bother her!
Unfortunately as this was going on my grandson with growing immense!
Dana got barometric surgery in Lost 140 lb and looks like a teenager but Alex as a teenager is still overweight at 250 lb.
Yes he's tall and he's a big young man but he's still overweight.
And of course the fast-food thing is history!
...
Now ask for me?
Yes, I love McDonald's french fries!
Good luck with this one and I got to burp!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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We have problems with weight as well, my daughters and I...I completely understand. Thank you for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Kayte Ray
Nice job
I like your poem
You are open and honest about yourself and it flows nicely
The presentation makes it easy to read and the graphic is a nice match
I like your vantage point here. well written.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Nice job
I like your poem
You are open and honest about yourself and it flows nicely
The presentation makes it easy to read and the graphic is a nice match
I like your vantage point here. well written.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much for this encouraging review, I appreciate it. :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Yup, I wish we could get away from fast food. McChicken is what we had yesterday here. too, without the fry though. It is just too handy to grab a quick sandwich and not having to walk into a diner.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Yup, I wish we could get away from fast food. McChicken is what we had yesterday here. too, without the fry though. It is just too handy to grab a quick sandwich and not having to walk into a diner.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I know, right? Plus fast food tastes good. ;) Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from DragonSkulls
Great entry, author. You're making me hungry. lol Yeah, who can resist the tasty treats McDonalds and Burger King have to offer. You chose a great picture to go with it. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Great entry, author. You're making me hungry. lol Yeah, who can resist the tasty treats McDonalds and Burger King have to offer. You chose a great picture to go with it. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I doubt people do this, although I'm completely on your side on this one....besides, how could they afford it? I myself only go month by month because it costs too much for my meager pocketbook. Anyway, thanks for this encouraging review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Rebel Jim
This is a very cool piece...
This flaw exists in quite a few of us (me included).
Didn't see any faults in your write... my compliments
on your choice of subject matter... Good Luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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This is a very cool piece...
This flaw exists in quite a few of us (me included).
Didn't see any faults in your write... my compliments
on your choice of subject matter... Good Luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much for this nice review, it's very appreciated. :)
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You did a great job,
as far as I'm concerned.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Haha. You speak for so many. If true, it can be overcome, specifically when you get old for one, you have no money or want to keep what you have, and two you don't desire to leave the house.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Haha. You speak for so many. If true, it can be overcome, specifically when you get old for one, you have no money or want to keep what you have, and two you don't desire to leave the house.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I'm the same way...but I just have my kids go get it and pay for it...they are such enablers! ;) Thanks for reading my poem.
Comment from Thatguypk
I love this. It's such a great fun poem about an issue so many of us face. I, myself, am more addicted to Chinese take-aways, but the result is exactly the same. Lack of will power is definitely the big issue. Sure, enjoy it while you can. :-)
PK
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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I love this. It's such a great fun poem about an issue so many of us face. I, myself, am more addicted to Chinese take-aways, but the result is exactly the same. Lack of will power is definitely the big issue. Sure, enjoy it while you can. :-)
PK
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thanks once again for reading my poem, it's nice to hear from you. :)
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Well, I like this story. I am guilty of the same thing. I know it is bad for us, however, it is like a bad habit, one that is hard to break. What would we do without those them? This hit home. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Well, I like this story. I am guilty of the same thing. I know it is bad for us, however, it is like a bad habit, one that is hard to break. What would we do without those them? This hit home. Have a great day.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this great review and for being a kindred spirit. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from WriterHeather
This is funny and very relatable to many people. Fast food can be very addictive, I can see why the author thinks its a flaw not to resist. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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This is funny and very relatable to many people. Fast food can be very addictive, I can see why the author thinks its a flaw not to resist. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the great 6 star review....it's always appreciated. :)
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Give me more I enjoyed it the picture the words going the words coincided together great job I wish you well keep up the good work have a beautiful day
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Give me more I enjoyed it the picture the words going the words coincided together great job I wish you well keep up the good work have a beautiful day
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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Thanks for reading and for your comments. I wonder, since you are only rating my work as good, that you might suggest ways to improve it. I'm very interested to know.
