Ever Since
My history with women9 total reviews
Comment from Wanderlust53
Great incite into your relationship life. Proof that there's the right one around the corner. Your writing is enjoyable to read, love that you has a good grasp on vocabulary. Gams was a great touch, as was eyes that spawned...
Keep writing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Great incite into your relationship life. Proof that there's the right one around the corner. Your writing is enjoyable to read, love that you has a good grasp on vocabulary. Gams was a great touch, as was eyes that spawned...
Keep writing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a history of love you also a contest entry.
"Ever Since"
There was definitely no mention of words here!
From maternal love in the beginning to puppy love to the very first kiss.
I must insist I was a virgin till the age of 21.
But before that there never would be any fun.
Yes, for I was extremely shy. And, never dated, carry the books class to class.
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Oh yes!
And, there was the one and when I would see them bosoms.
I was only in fifth grade.
And, I would have to pull my shirt out quickly!
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Twinkle twinkle Little Star?
How I now wonder where that hottie are?
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Truly impressive synthesizer along the way!
Yes!
And, in my quest?
Assume you broke my shyness and I had the best!
At one time!
At the beach on Long Beach Island with three cuties in bikinis!
Yes, I thought I was Charlie with the Angels!
Yes, and that was age only age 17.
Until Lori came along and broke my Heart.
Yes, by running away to college in Hawaii!
Sending me letters about the beer party she was going to!
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You seem to always remember the one with the legs!
Yes, and this one had them, that's most definitely was true!
But Lori Jacobson?
Yes, wasn't the one for me nor would she be the one for you!
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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This is a history of love you also a contest entry.
"Ever Since"
There was definitely no mention of words here!
From maternal love in the beginning to puppy love to the very first kiss.
I must insist I was a virgin till the age of 21.
But before that there never would be any fun.
Yes, for I was extremely shy. And, never dated, carry the books class to class.
...
Oh yes!
And, there was the one and when I would see them bosoms.
I was only in fifth grade.
And, I would have to pull my shirt out quickly!
...
Twinkle twinkle Little Star?
How I now wonder where that hottie are?
...
Truly impressive synthesizer along the way!
Yes!
And, in my quest?
Assume you broke my shyness and I had the best!
At one time!
At the beach on Long Beach Island with three cuties in bikinis!
Yes, I thought I was Charlie with the Angels!
Yes, and that was age only age 17.
Until Lori came along and broke my Heart.
Yes, by running away to college in Hawaii!
Sending me letters about the beer party she was going to!
...
You seem to always remember the one with the legs!
Yes, and this one had them, that's most definitely was true!
But Lori Jacobson?
Yes, wasn't the one for me nor would she be the one for you!
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 18-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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You're funny
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
My impression from this poem is that your are talented at your craft. I enjoyed the sensation of development and growth of your character, and your photography is sublime! You need to put in the notes what a gam is (or correct if it's a SPAG). Kate
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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My impression from this poem is that your are talented at your craft. I enjoyed the sensation of development and growth of your character, and your photography is sublime! You need to put in the notes what a gam is (or correct if it's a SPAG). Kate
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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gam; synonym of legs, especially the female variety. I use it to describe calves. I'll add it to my notes if they allow it.
Comment from lindafisher
How many of us have searched our whole lives to find the one. Many are "interviewed" and try out for the part. But alas. Then when all hope is gone, there they are. Better late than never. Well documented my friend.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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How many of us have searched our whole lives to find the one. Many are "interviewed" and try out for the part. But alas. Then when all hope is gone, there they are. Better late than never. Well documented my friend.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
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Appreciate the kind words
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a well thought out poem following a fairly long life full of longing. You mostly looked for the physical appearance of females, even the one you love. But you noticed the teacher who was kinder and the teenager who was a vain hope and I hope the loved one who had more depth than her beauty.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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This is a well thought out poem following a fairly long life full of longing. You mostly looked for the physical appearance of females, even the one you love. But you noticed the teacher who was kinder and the teenager who was a vain hope and I hope the loved one who had more depth than her beauty.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Truth be told, if I did notice their appearance it wasn't sexual. I only notice them as I would a Bonomo taffy candy bar. Gooey, cracked if refrigerated, delicious to the taste, and had it legs I would have seen them too.
Comment from prettybluebirds
I love this poem. I think most men are a lot like you where women are concerned. I remember in high school how all the boys were in love with our art teacher. She was a lovely woman. This is nicely written and I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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I love this poem. I think most men are a lot like you where women are concerned. I remember in high school how all the boys were in love with our art teacher. She was a lovely woman. This is nicely written and I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem is very captivating. I really like what you said about growing up and facing the years of adulthood. Many of the years are a wonderful venture although you will want to strive and find the one true love.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Your poem is very captivating. I really like what you said about growing up and facing the years of adulthood. Many of the years are a wonderful venture although you will want to strive and find the one true love.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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I wouldn't mind living the reverie over again. :))
Comment from Spitfire
I enjoyed reading this poem and following your adventures with women. A lot of small boys express wanting to marry their mother. Crushes on teachers sounds familiar too. I know I had a couple I yearned to be with. I'm sure you shared this poem with your wife and she rewarded you well. :-)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading this poem and following your adventures with women. A lot of small boys express wanting to marry their mother. Crushes on teachers sounds familiar too. I know I had a couple I yearned to be with. I'm sure you shared this poem with your wife and she rewarded you well. :-)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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42 years worth of rewards
Comment from Heather Burroughs
Your poem is vivid and full of imagery. I can clearly see your life. It's perfect for this contest. Your picture is beautiful as well. Best of luck with your entry in the upcoming contest. Many blessings to you
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Your poem is vivid and full of imagery. I can clearly see your life. It's perfect for this contest. Your picture is beautiful as well. Best of luck with your entry in the upcoming contest. Many blessings to you
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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You are very kind. Thanks
