Verse and Story for 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "The Eyes of Love"poems, stories
6 total reviews
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed your poem and the sentiment is heartfelt. There's nothing better to write about then love. I feel so blessed to be married for 21 years to my one and only and through your writing you obviously feel the same about yours.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed your poem and the sentiment is heartfelt. There's nothing better to write about then love. I feel so blessed to be married for 21 years to my one and only and through your writing you obviously feel the same about yours.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Dear K.L., thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Bill Schott
This Valentine monorhyme, The Eyes of Love, manages to keep the like-rhyming end-words as you create this testament to enduring love. Nice.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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This Valentine monorhyme, The Eyes of Love, manages to keep the like-rhyming end-words as you create this testament to enduring love. Nice.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Hi Bill, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from papa55mike
Love is the most powerful force in the universe but so difficult to find the right one. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the rhyme. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Love is the most powerful force in the universe but so difficult to find the right one. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the rhyme. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2022
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Dear mike, thank you for your comments and review. Dove God bless you too! Dove
Comment from Thatguypk
This is a very nice poem and a very good description of love, appropriately written on Valentine's day. Does this perfect love really exist? I suppose we all hope that it does and that we might find it. Or, like myself, we content ourselves with something slightly less perfect but nevertheless beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
PK
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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This is a very nice poem and a very good description of love, appropriately written on Valentine's day. Does this perfect love really exist? I suppose we all hope that it does and that we might find it. Or, like myself, we content ourselves with something slightly less perfect but nevertheless beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
PK
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Hi PK, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from LisaMay
This is cleverly crafted - to cover so many aspects of love and to do it with mono-rhyming is skilful. As you say in your poem, the treasure of love occurs when we find a unique love, being faithful and accepting of diferences.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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This is cleverly crafted - to cover so many aspects of love and to do it with mono-rhyming is skilful. As you say in your poem, the treasure of love occurs when we find a unique love, being faithful and accepting of diferences.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Dear Lisa, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Eunice Amero
I fell in love and now he is hurting me badly. I wonder sometimes if a man can really love. My heart is broken in pieces and to read this makes me want to cry. You did a good job. Good luck
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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I fell in love and now he is hurting me badly. I wonder sometimes if a man can really love. My heart is broken in pieces and to read this makes me want to cry. You did a good job. Good luck
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Dear Eunice, I'm sorry about your heartbreak, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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You are welcome. I still have that hurt in my heart. I hope it soon leaves.
