Nothing Else To Do
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Comment from royowen
A lovely love story, and the humorous poetry you've written here Linda, it's an excellent post, and reveals you worthy expertise and some wit by this cleverly crafted poem. Is it true you've been together for 18 years? Well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
A lovely love story, and the humorous poetry you've written here Linda, it's an excellent post, and reveals you worthy expertise and some wit by this cleverly crafted poem. Is it true you've been together for 18 years? Well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you Roy for your lovely comments. X
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Most welcome
Comment from Richard Montfort Cary
What a charming, delightful, smile-arousing poem. Even the rhyme is totally bearable and actually adds to the fun and the pleasure. And what a punch line. Thanks and congratulations!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
What a charming, delightful, smile-arousing poem. Even the rhyme is totally bearable and actually adds to the fun and the pleasure. And what a punch line. Thanks and congratulations!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you Richard for your kind review and the 6 stars. X
Comment from Eunice Amero
Sometimes our designs can be a mistake but yours wasn't because you had nothing else to do. Good thing. You found love that was a good thing. Good story and good luck
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
Sometimes our designs can be a mistake but yours wasn't because you had nothing else to do. Good thing. You found love that was a good thing. Good story and good luck
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you Eunice for your kind review and the 6 stars. X
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You are very welcome.
Comment from prettybluebirds
I love this poem and the ending is perfect. The only error I spotted is you forgot to put the word (a) before the bike. We even have a bike. Otherwise, it is perfect and I enjoyed reading it. Nicely done.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
I love this poem and the ending is perfect. The only error I spotted is you forgot to put the word (a) before the bike. We even have a bike. Otherwise, it is perfect and I enjoyed reading it. Nicely done.
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your kind comments. X