Sky of Emotion
Nonet8 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Nonet poems are so fun to write. This poem is telling us that there was a raging storm (perhaps someone's voice) approaching, where the lightning struck, the walls cracked.
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Nonet poems are so fun to write. This poem is telling us that there was a raging storm (perhaps someone's voice) approaching, where the lightning struck, the walls cracked.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from jaded831
Powerful is the best way to describe your nonet. I could feel the power of the thunderstorm in your poem. I remembered how as children my mom would say the loud sound was God bowling. Good luck.
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Powerful is the best way to describe your nonet. I could feel the power of the thunderstorm in your poem. I remembered how as children my mom would say the loud sound was God bowling. Good luck.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Nonet Poem Contest writing prompt. Good nonet poetic form. It draws upon emotions and it presents strong images..
I would change the font to white, it's hard to read black over dark grey.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Excellent entry for the Nonet Poem Contest writing prompt. Good nonet poetic form. It draws upon emotions and it presents strong images..
I would change the font to white, it's hard to read black over dark grey.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery Poet wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your Nonet poem prompt entry, I think you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello mystery Poet wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your Nonet poem prompt entry, I think you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
Comment from Heather Burroughs
This is a beautiful nonet poem. I particularly like the background color and picture that you chose, it correlates perfectly.
Best of luck with your entry in the upcoming contest. Many blessings to you.
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This is a beautiful nonet poem. I particularly like the background color and picture that you chose, it correlates perfectly.
Best of luck with your entry in the upcoming contest. Many blessings to you.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem is very bleak, filled with powerful emotions that you have portrayed very effectively with your dramatic words. The lightning bolt adds even more intensity to your presentation.
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Your poem is very bleak, filled with powerful emotions that you have portrayed very effectively with your dramatic words. The lightning bolt adds even more intensity to your presentation.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from VJWild
I love the shape, pace, and mood of this poem and how it turns into a metaphor as the lines get smaller. The artwork is perfect, the colors are perfect. These are hard to write, but this is a great piece! Good luck!
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I love the shape, pace, and mood of this poem and how it turns into a metaphor as the lines get smaller. The artwork is perfect, the colors are perfect. These are hard to write, but this is a great piece! Good luck!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Very nice. Good selection for photo. Thoughtful. Poignant. Good luck in the contest. Now on to your portfolio as this piece has me interested in what else you have written.
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Very nice. Good selection for photo. Thoughtful. Poignant. Good luck in the contest. Now on to your portfolio as this piece has me interested in what else you have written.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
