Drifter
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Comment from LisaMay
You've caught a lovely sense of movement in this poem which the chosen illustration suits very well. Your words link well to seasonal changes as well as a fleeting romance with a footloose lover.
In the first line, I am wondering if 'blue' is intentional, or should be more accurately spelled 'blew'?
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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You've caught a lovely sense of movement in this poem which the chosen illustration suits very well. Your words link well to seasonal changes as well as a fleeting romance with a footloose lover.
In the first line, I am wondering if 'blue' is intentional, or should be more accurately spelled 'blew'?
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind words and review, and thank you also for pointing out the homophone. Hugs.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Interesting, however should blue in line one be blew since the leaves indicate movement beneath wings, floating and leaving from a grounded tarmac? Good luck.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Interesting, however should blue in line one be blew since the leaves indicate movement beneath wings, floating and leaving from a grounded tarmac? Good luck.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thank you for catching that. I appreciate it.
