It Just Won't Work, Fin
What would you do differently?17 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I loved this story, you made it so believable, too. You should write more prose. You've really taken this prompt and made a super sweet love story, but then you broke the poor fish's heart! Shame on you! Lol. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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I loved this story, you made it so believable, too. You should write more prose. You've really taken this prompt and made a super sweet love story, but then you broke the poor fish's heart! Shame on you! Lol. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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a grin a mile wide with your finishing comment. I never egged it on, honest.
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Hmmm! Lol. xx
Comment from lyenochka
You did a great job with this contest challenge! I like your descriptions of the fish's behavior and how a fish might express being in love. Enjoyed your humor even the excuse of religious differences instead of the species difference! Best wishes in the contest!
Is that what Fin has in mind? Marriage. (maybe even the Marriage part should be a question also. Marriage? - at least, that's how I hear it when I read it.)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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You did a great job with this contest challenge! I like your descriptions of the fish's behavior and how a fish might express being in love. Enjoyed your humor even the excuse of religious differences instead of the species difference! Best wishes in the contest!
Is that what Fin has in mind? Marriage. (maybe even the Marriage part should be a question also. Marriage? - at least, that's how I hear it when I read it.)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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ok :)
Comment from Heather Burroughs
Your story was cute, lighthearted and humorous. Wonderful job! I think it's perfect for the contest.
Best of luck with your entry in the upcoming contest.
Many blessings to you
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Your story was cute, lighthearted and humorous. Wonderful job! I think it's perfect for the contest.
Best of luck with your entry in the upcoming contest.
Many blessings to you
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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live long and prosper
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your response to this prompt is excellent--skillfully written, entertaining, and vividly descriptive of how the little fish moves about in its bowl and how its behavior starts to change. The ending is especially good.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Your response to this prompt is excellent--skillfully written, entertaining, and vividly descriptive of how the little fish moves about in its bowl and how its behavior starts to change. The ending is especially good.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank for the smile you caused with such a nice review. Now tell me how to n ominate you as a reviewer of essence???
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Click on my name. Then click on "Nominate"! (WOW!!) :-)
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i did it
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Bless you! :-)
Comment from Wendy G
Good one Tom! Your well written story is very engaging and humorous. The way you wrote it I could visualise it all, so you had me laughing. Best wishes for your entry. Hope it does well.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Good one Tom! Your well written story is very engaging and humorous. The way you wrote it I could visualise it all, so you had me laughing. Best wishes for your entry. Hope it does well.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Hooray for ... Dollywood.
Comment from The Journaler
Had to laugh when I got to the end of this..Great story. well written and kept my interest to the end. Good job! I hope you do well in the contest.
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Had to laugh when I got to the end of this..Great story. well written and kept my interest to the end. Good job! I hope you do well in the contest.
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thank you, my friend. I have discovered I like writing short stories which I rarely do but the challenge contests if not asking for a litany of extraneous word, generate my interest.
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You are welcome
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Appreciate it.
Comment from Earl Corp
What a strange fish tale for the something's fishy contest. It was very creative and imaginitive. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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What a strange fish tale for the something's fishy contest. It was very creative and imaginitive. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Welcome. Thanks. Let me see what you have to read.
