Cheryl Cheerful
A delightful person to know16 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
I really enjoyed this poem of yours. It's cheery and bouncy! Two things that I like the most in a poem. When I was growing up, I was on the chubby side but everyone always said that I was Ms. Personality. Yup! Yup! That's me!!
Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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I really enjoyed this poem of yours. It's cheery and bouncy! Two things that I like the most in a poem. When I was growing up, I was on the chubby side but everyone always said that I was Ms. Personality. Yup! Yup! That's me!!
Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much, Patty, for your enthusiastic response to Cheryl.
Rod
Comment from pome lover
we do need people like that, and more power to them. Positive people who seem always to be up have given courage to, and probably saved the sanity of many a soul.
A good example of personification of emotion, and a good poem.
Best of luck in the contest.
Katharine
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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we do need people like that, and more power to them. Positive people who seem always to be up have given courage to, and probably saved the sanity of many a soul.
A good example of personification of emotion, and a good poem.
Best of luck in the contest.
Katharine
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Indeed Cheryl is a necessary commodity these days. Thank you very much for your kind praise of my poem. Rod
Comment from LisaMay
Ms. Cheerful is a welcome ray of sunshine anywhere... capable of brightening any dark moments. You've described her in well-rhymed lines of 8-syllables. It seems such a pity she can't be real because she's just too nice... we're a grumpy lot.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Ms. Cheerful is a welcome ray of sunshine anywhere... capable of brightening any dark moments. You've described her in well-rhymed lines of 8-syllables. It seems such a pity she can't be real because she's just too nice... we're a grumpy lot.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Oh, Lisa, there are a few Cheryls out there. I truly appreciate your kind praise of my poem. Rod
Comment from Flyaway1
How fun and creative. We could use some cheeer in these days. I liked the picture used. A great entry for making an emotion true.
Just a few small tics
Third stanza : a comma after you need, whenever
4th stanza
Comma between optimist, whose
Good luck in contest
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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How fun and creative. We could use some cheeer in these days. I liked the picture used. A great entry for making an emotion true.
Just a few small tics
Third stanza : a comma after you need, whenever
4th stanza
Comma between optimist, whose
Good luck in contest
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much, Flyaway 1, for taking the time to review and make suggestions. Rod
Comment from Eunice Amero
Nice to meet a nice person. I can love them. They put a smile on your face. Them at times you meet a homey person you can feel right at Ltd home with them. This was a good poem good luck
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Nice to meet a nice person. I can love them. They put a smile on your face. Them at times you meet a homey person you can feel right at Ltd home with them. This was a good poem good luck
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Eunice, I cannot thank you enough for your wonderful response to CHERYL and those six bright stars. Rod
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You are more than welcome. Take care
Comment from JanPerry
Yes, I suppose there are people around who are constantly cheery. Some find them annoying. I like to think they are deep and have a soul as well as being happy in our presence. What makes her so happy? I will never know from reading this.
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Yes, I suppose there are people around who are constantly cheery. Some find them annoying. I like to think they are deep and have a soul as well as being happy in our presence. What makes her so happy? I will never know from reading this.
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Jan, for sharing and praising CHERYL. Yes, there are wonderful people like her out there. I've been fortunate enough to know at least two. Rod
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Me too
