Tyrannical time
A pantoum poem.39 total reviews
Comment from scongrove
This is fantastic writing, my dear friend :) Love the image you placed with this. Sorry I haven't been on for a while. We have been snowed in and I have had a stomach bug. Feeling better today and ready to read your beautiful posts.
I learned something new. I did not know what a Pantoum was. You are very gifted my friend.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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This is fantastic writing, my dear friend :) Love the image you placed with this. Sorry I haven't been on for a while. We have been snowed in and I have had a stomach bug. Feeling better today and ready to read your beautiful posts.
I learned something new. I did not know what a Pantoum was. You are very gifted my friend.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks for being my friend Shana, you give me conviction to carry on, Roy
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi Sir I like to be free and write freely. But I do certainly admire the courage and the dexterity of those who venture out to pick a flower in the wilderness. So I admire this write and give praise to it.As for time I we all make a mistake here. For me there has never been a thing like time.it is a chimera of the mind. There was s no beginning or end to anything in this world, it is just a continuation, mystic, unwritten . We only cut it in slices to measure our own thoughts and being.
Thank you so much.
God bless
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Hi Sir I like to be free and write freely. But I do certainly admire the courage and the dexterity of those who venture out to pick a flower in the wilderness. So I admire this write and give praise to it.As for time I we all make a mistake here. For me there has never been a thing like time.it is a chimera of the mind. There was s no beginning or end to anything in this world, it is just a continuation, mystic, unwritten . We only cut it in slices to measure our own thoughts and being.
Thank you so much.
God bless
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Benny, for these fantastic comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your poem causes up to ponder it's meaning. Yes, death is going to happen. We can't stop it, but we can be ready. We can be right with God, then we shouldn't be afraid. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Your poem causes up to ponder it's meaning. Yes, death is going to happen. We can't stop it, but we can be ready. We can be right with God, then we shouldn't be afraid. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks again Barbara, for these wonderful comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Dear Roy,
Another fine poem. I enjoyed the Pantoum-style poem. It had a good rhyme scheme, it flowed well, with creative wording. Great job my friend.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Dear Roy,
Another fine poem. I enjoyed the Pantoum-style poem. It had a good rhyme scheme, it flowed well, with creative wording. Great job my friend.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Darlene, for these wonderful comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from justafan
Your work is always thought provoking, my friend. This is no exception.
Although I am not a standard poetry expert, I know exactly what I like and this spoke to me.
Thank you for sharing part of your wonderous mind with us.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Your work is always thought provoking, my friend. This is no exception.
Although I am not a standard poetry expert, I know exactly what I like and this spoke to me.
Thank you for sharing part of your wonderous mind with us.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks Missy, for these wonderful comments and a most encouraging review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your pantoum is excellent in every respect--skillfully written and vividly descriptive. Through the sustained personification of the
"tyrant," time, throughout the poem, you have conveyed a powerful message.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Your pantoum is excellent in every respect--skillfully written and vividly descriptive. Through the sustained personification of the
"tyrant," time, throughout the poem, you have conveyed a powerful message.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Janice, for these fantastic comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from jaded831
A bit hard to understand. Because I found words I didn't know the meaning. I read your poem a couple of times. I feel it says death is inevitable, it doesn't care about age. Bad times or good life always is a roller coaster. Until death do us part.
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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A bit hard to understand. Because I found words I didn't know the meaning. I read your poem a couple of times. I feel it says death is inevitable, it doesn't care about age. Bad times or good life always is a roller coaster. Until death do us part.
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much for these fantastic comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from BethShelby
This is an different form of poetry with repetitive lines. You are asking a question without giving answers I suppose because only God would know the answer to this question.
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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This is an different form of poetry with repetitive lines. You are asking a question without giving answers I suppose because only God would know the answer to this question.
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks Beth, for these lovely comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Rebel Jim
Damn you're good at this!
I've seen some big words that I didn't know existed.
Don't see any faults with your piece, as usual you've done
a magnificent job... Keep them coming, my Friend!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Damn you're good at this!
I've seen some big words that I didn't know existed.
Don't see any faults with your piece, as usual you've done
a magnificent job... Keep them coming, my Friend!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much Jim for these fantastic comments and a super review, blessings Roy
