Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from BethShelby
This horse really seem to like Alexandra. She doesn't want to start a relationship on the rebound, but it seem obvious she likes Cord. We didn't find out whether or not they were able find the people who went over in the helicopter. That seems likely the way they are getting in.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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This horse really seem to like Alexandra. She doesn't want to start a relationship on the rebound, but it seem obvious she likes Cord. We didn't find out whether or not they were able find the people who went over in the helicopter. That seems likely the way they are getting in.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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They didn't discover anything, so the mystery continues. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
So Alexander and Jewel are going not move firm friends as I'm sure Cord and Alexander will have each other in the. The saying does say that the way to a man's heart is through his stomach. You have a lovely time in Missouri with your Mum. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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So Alexander and Jewel are going not move firm friends as I'm sure Cord and Alexander will have each other in the. The saying does say that the way to a man's heart is through his stomach. You have a lovely time in Missouri with your Mum. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. I think Cord and Ali will find their way, but it will be slow.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Jewel and Alexandra are going to belong together, I can tell that. And, already I can tell that Cord and Alexander belong together, too. I quite understand how she felt about herself and her cooking. It doesn't take much to take all your confidence away. That Allen needs shooting. :) Well done, a wonderful chapter. Sandra. xx
Have a lovely time with your mother!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Jewel and Alexandra are going to belong together, I can tell that. And, already I can tell that Cord and Alexander belong together, too. I quite understand how she felt about herself and her cooking. It doesn't take much to take all your confidence away. That Allen needs shooting. :) Well done, a wonderful chapter. Sandra. xx
Have a lovely time with your mother!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Alan will eventually get what he deserves but it will be a rocky road. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Congrats for completing more novels; I like this novel and have read pleasant this voluminous work on writing the romantic fiction within the world of legal practices; in the fashion of enquiries now Cord asks Ali some hard questions to reveal the truth; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Congrats for completing more novels; I like this novel and have read pleasant this voluminous work on writing the romantic fiction within the world of legal practices; in the fashion of enquiries now Cord asks Ali some hard questions to reveal the truth; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement. I've been missing your posts. Are you not writing, right now?
Comment from Ricky1024
"Quiet Lawyer Chapter Four"
Was very well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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"Quiet Lawyer Chapter Four"
Was very well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from lancellot
This was a longer chapter, but well paced. Good job on the scene switches and the multiple continuing story lines. You must keep excellent notes.
notes:
Alexandra hesitated, before she continued, "Cord {risk} his life for me."
- risked
That Luke guy's the problem. The sheriff said he might
- Wait, Luke pulled a gun during an attempted sexual assault, and threatened to kill someone with it. He should be in jail looking a five to ten years in prison.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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This was a longer chapter, but well paced. Good job on the scene switches and the multiple continuing story lines. You must keep excellent notes.
notes:
Alexandra hesitated, before she continued, "Cord {risk} his life for me."
- risked
That Luke guy's the problem. The sheriff said he might
- Wait, Luke pulled a gun during an attempted sexual assault, and threatened to kill someone with it. He should be in jail looking a five to ten years in prison.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Ali didn't press charges. We will find out later, the next time he causes trouble, that he did do some jail time. I have fixed the risked, must have been fixing it as you were reading. Thank you for the kind review. I actually use a calendar as a timeline.
Comment from eliz100
This is another great chapter. Your writing kept me, the reader, interested the whole way through. There is one small edit, in the section that starts with, "Not really I don't want to leave".......Cord risk (ed) for me.
While in Missouri, take the opportunity to live in the moment. Journal every day and you will get ideas for future books. Your mom has led a lifetime of family memories. You have a chance to collect them before she is gone.
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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This is another great chapter. Your writing kept me, the reader, interested the whole way through. There is one small edit, in the section that starts with, "Not really I don't want to leave".......Cord risk (ed) for me.
While in Missouri, take the opportunity to live in the moment. Journal every day and you will get ideas for future books. Your mom has led a lifetime of family memories. You have a chance to collect them before she is gone.
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Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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You are so right and I will take advantage of it. Thank you for the kind review and I fix that area.
