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Sea Monster tales

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mermaid and her sea monster

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Comment from judiverse
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Ugh! I don't know how the mermaid could be attracted to that, but everyone has her own taste. At least she's cautious. Great use of alliteration with Caressed, Calling, etc. You describe the sea in such a way it does sound like a welcoming place. judi

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
    Yes, this creature is not very attractive. Thanks for reading about these two unique friends. Elaine
reply by judiverse on 06-Apr-2022
    You're welcome. judi
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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This is a cute poem. Sea monsters have stories to tell. There is no telling what is out there in those waters. Especially, the seas and oceans. There may be creatures we many not want to encounter. Thank you for the post.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
    Thank you for reading and enjoying. Elaine
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 05-Apr-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from Maria Millsaps
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I found this writing interesting, and cute, in the setting of a coral, where Nemo lives. I notice all the words starting with C and I was wondering if this is the theme of the book?

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
    I was playing with the letter C. Thanks for your encouraging words. Elaine