A Family Love Connection
15 words - The baby's arrival.9 total reviews
Comment from karenina
The grandma in me just melts as I read this poem. Your alliteration is nearly as precious as the baby's sweet fingers. Well, now maybe that's going too far, but you get my point, right? It's these little bundles that put the gold in golden years!
Karenina
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The grandma in me just melts as I read this poem. Your alliteration is nearly as precious as the baby's sweet fingers. Well, now maybe that's going too far, but you get my point, right? It's these little bundles that put the gold in golden years!
Karenina
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
Comment from Sugarray77
I commend you on writing an excellent verse for this prompt. The endearing theme resonates with all of us who have little grandchildren. My first was born on New Year's Day. :). Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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I commend you on writing an excellent verse for this prompt. The endearing theme resonates with all of us who have little grandchildren. My first was born on New Year's Day. :). Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thanks for your supportive review. How lovely for you - the birth of your first grandchild - a family landmark. (Unfortunately, I don't have children, so I won't be able to experience that particular joy.)
Comment from BethShelby
This is such a sweet picture and those grandchildren do have a firm grip on their grandmothers' hearts. Touch is one of the best of senses for bonding. All children deserve to feel the hand of love on them.
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This is such a sweet picture and those grandchildren do have a firm grip on their grandmothers' hearts. Touch is one of the best of senses for bonding. All children deserve to feel the hand of love on them.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
Comment from Gee
Very nice poem.
I think this will do well in the picture poem competition. It will touch many peoples hearts.
Thanks for sharing your poem and good luck in the contest.
Gee
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Very nice poem.
I think this will do well in the picture poem competition. It will touch many peoples hearts.
Thanks for sharing your poem and good luck in the contest.
Gee
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
Comment from RodG
This picture poem is precious. Indeed, Poet, you have SHOWN us how and why this "perfect package" can make a grandma happy. Nice use of alliteration in your 15-word message. Rod
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This picture poem is precious. Indeed, Poet, you have SHOWN us how and why this "perfect package" can make a grandma happy. Nice use of alliteration in your 15-word message. Rod
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Tiny perfect package
tied with loving bond -
her chubby cherub fingers
gripping Grandma's glad heart."
Very well chosen fifteen words to illustrate this delightful picture. Nothing so precious as a new-born baby.
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"Tiny perfect package
tied with loving bond -
her chubby cherub fingers
gripping Grandma's glad heart."
Very well chosen fifteen words to illustrate this delightful picture. Nothing so precious as a new-born baby.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen-word picture poem, A Family Love Connection, has the proper word count and freezes the moment when a tiny soul, filled with love, invades another. Nice.
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This fifteen-word picture poem, A Family Love Connection, has the proper word count and freezes the moment when a tiny soul, filled with love, invades another. Nice.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks about the picture how sweet and lovable is the family connection, at the arrival of a baby in the family, the grandma's love connection reveals the bond of love; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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This poem speaks about the picture how sweet and lovable is the family connection, at the arrival of a baby in the family, the grandma's love connection reveals the bond of love; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
Comment from Eternal Muse
How adorable is that! There can be nothing more precious than these little fingers. And the grandma's hand is holding them so lovingly! Beautiful imagery, visuals and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
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How adorable is that! There can be nothing more precious than these little fingers. And the grandma's hand is holding them so lovingly! Beautiful imagery, visuals and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
