A Prayer For Upright Living
Developing a spiritual relationship on the way.10 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Looking down when walking perhaps gives us support so we don't fall. To look up to heaven's glory brightens our day and we know that God is overseeing us every step of the way.
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Looking down when walking perhaps gives us support so we don't fall. To look up to heaven's glory brightens our day and we know that God is overseeing us every step of the way.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
Comment from MissMerri
A very meaningful poem, properly arranged in the 5-7-9 order, and with a most appealing illustration too. I loved the words and the presentation and hope this does very well in the contest. Good luck!
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A very meaningful poem, properly arranged in the 5-7-9 order, and with a most appealing illustration too. I loved the words and the presentation and hope this does very well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
Comment from jaded831
Stand tall and feel the power coursing through your body. Faith keeps us strong in tuff situations. I praise the Lord in good and bad times. Your poem is powerful and touches my soul. Good luck in the contest.
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Stand tall and feel the power coursing through your body. Faith keeps us strong in tuff situations. I praise the Lord in good and bad times. Your poem is powerful and touches my soul. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-9 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.
I like the thought of standing tall in God's eyes.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-9 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.
I like the thought of standing tall in God's eyes.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
Comment from Wendy G
A great photo to support your words in this short poem. Yes, it is practical to be alert and careful, but to have a higher perspective as well, and also appropriate self-value. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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A great photo to support your words in this short poem. Yes, it is practical to be alert and careful, but to have a higher perspective as well, and also appropriate self-value. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says
it all! I found these words to be a lovely way to worship God. The artwork is awesome and compliments the words and theme of this poem.
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says
it all! I found these words to be a lovely way to worship God. The artwork is awesome and compliments the words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
Comment from royowen
The one thing we must always remember is that we are children of their most high God, who's not ashamed of us, and we should neither be ashamed of Him or ourselves, stand tall. Beautifully written, great advice, good luck, blessings Roy
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The one thing we must always remember is that we are children of their most high God, who's not ashamed of us, and we should neither be ashamed of Him or ourselves, stand tall. Beautifully written, great advice, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
Comment from Heather Burroughs
This is a lovely poem. Your faith shines through. Every word of your poem is true. Good luck with your entry in the upcoming contest. Many blessings to you.
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This is a lovely poem. Your faith shines through. Every word of your poem is true. Good luck with your entry in the upcoming contest. Many blessings to you.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
Comment from Gee
Very nice spiritual poem.
I think this is for a competition.
I hope you do well in the contest.
The poem has a great message
And the imagery is good also.
Thanks for letting us view your work.
Gee
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Very nice spiritual poem.
I think this is for a competition.
I hope you do well in the contest.
The poem has a great message
And the imagery is good also.
Thanks for letting us view your work.
Gee
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This right is about having confidence in life with the support of our beliefs, when we are believers we never feel alone, I can identify with your words here, love Dolly x
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This right is about having confidence in life with the support of our beliefs, when we are believers we never feel alone, I can identify with your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
