Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well written. Good work.
Very credible dialogue.
I don't know about the gun scene, though.
Once a gun is pulled , I'm shootin'. Better now than later when I ain't ready.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Well written. Good work.
Very credible dialogue.
I don't know about the gun scene, though.
Once a gun is pulled , I'm shootin'. Better now than later when I ain't ready.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Interesting details about the filly. She will be a tough on to break. Maybe she'll receive so much attention she'll get used to being handled. Luke was out of line. He should have known better than to be so pushy. I lived in Texas for several years but didn't know of people carrying guns. Maybe it depends on where they are. I thought the horse auction was quite interesting. If Alexandria is a lawyer, she'll need to get back to work soon. She'll be missing the income. The Ortiz family is so nice. judi
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Interesting details about the filly. She will be a tough on to break. Maybe she'll receive so much attention she'll get used to being handled. Luke was out of line. He should have known better than to be so pushy. I lived in Texas for several years but didn't know of people carrying guns. Maybe it depends on where they are. I thought the horse auction was quite interesting. If Alexandria is a lawyer, she'll need to get back to work soon. She'll be missing the income. The Ortiz family is so nice. judi
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. When I go to HEB, I see many holstered guns. LOL In West Texas it's worse.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is well-written and quite interesting. Your conversations are very like people speak and actions match the characters. The only question I have is in the line--Luke warned . . . back, he silenced. (What?) Looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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This is well-written and quite interesting. Your conversations are very like people speak and actions match the characters. The only question I have is in the line--Luke warned . . . back, he silenced. (What?) Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. He quit talking. Since it confused you, I'll look at it again.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Your story is progressing well, I like how you have introduced this new character, Luke, and have a feeling we will hear more about him in the coming weeks. I like stories about horses.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Your story is progressing well, I like how you have introduced this new character, Luke, and have a feeling we will hear more about him in the coming weeks. I like stories about horses.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome
Comment from lancellot
A well written chapter. Everything was made in your style. The action was... well, Luke's action was right on par with what he was written for and placed in the scene to do.
Good work.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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A well written chapter. Everything was made in your style. The action was... well, Luke's action was right on par with what he was written for and placed in the scene to do.
Good work.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
Interesting chapter. Luke just wouldn't give up. Is it true that a lot of people carry guns in Texas? I would think with a lot of hot heads around that would be a dangerous thing to do. I'm enjoyed the new story and I always look forward to the Football story.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Interesting chapter. Luke just wouldn't give up. Is it true that a lot of people carry guns in Texas? I would think with a lot of hot heads around that would be a dangerous thing to do. I'm enjoyed the new story and I always look forward to the Football story.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. When I go to the grocery store, I see many holstered guns. It seems only in the cities, where having guns is less popular because they are Blue/liberal, there's more crimes committed with gun. Having guns causing murders or shooting is a huge lie. Look at Chicago, the one of the strictest gun controlled city in the US and the highest murder, shotting rates.
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They are too easy to get for the criminals. I'm not against guns. I grew up with them and have one by my bed, but I would be horrified if people were walking the streets carrying guns. Peoples' tempers flair to easily, and if they have a gun handy it seems dangerous to me.
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It's not the people who obey the gun laws that's the problem. If they restricted guns the bad guys would still get them. They confiscate truck loads of illegal guns coming into the states from Mexica almost daily.
Comment from royowen
Ah the first sign of real emotion. And Cordero finds himself staring into the barrel of a gun, from a man who is harassing Alexandra, he endeavours to defend her honour, but the man, who is called Luke, harasses her for a second time, fortunately a friend comes up behind the bully and the fight is over. With that Alexandra decides it might be better in New York, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Ah the first sign of real emotion. And Cordero finds himself staring into the barrel of a gun, from a man who is harassing Alexandra, he endeavours to defend her honour, but the man, who is called Luke, harasses her for a second time, fortunately a friend comes up behind the bully and the fight is over. With that Alexandra decides it might be better in New York, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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I have a hunch that Ali won't go back to NYC anytime soon. How about you? LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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I agree,
Comment from nomi338
I just know that Luke is about to be taught a painful lesson. He has apparently bitten off much more than he will be able to chew. I am also willing to wager that the missing bulls are his handiwork.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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I just know that Luke is about to be taught a painful lesson. He has apparently bitten off much more than he will be able to chew. I am also willing to wager that the missing bulls are his handiwork.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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I can promise it gets interesting with Luke. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a good chapter, Barbara. I wonder who that little filly is for. :) Alexandra seems a little skittish for a New Yorker, but I guess it's a different type of environment.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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This is a good chapter, Barbara. I wonder who that little filly is for. :) Alexandra seems a little skittish for a New Yorker, but I guess it's a different type of environment.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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You will discover later that she was completely protected by her powerful father. Rosa, Jorge, and Cord know this because they know the family. Rosa knows Ali, but the other two do not. Thank you for the kind review.
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Ah okay. You?re welcome.
Comment from robyn corum
Barb,
How on earth are you doing TWO NOVELS at the same time??!!! Oh, my stars. And you ain't playing, neither. Wow.
Guys being so aggressive with a young girl. Guns already coming out. Whew! If this is just chapter THREE what else do you have in mind?
And four thousand dollars (possibly) for a horse?? I had no idea!
Great start!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Barb,
How on earth are you doing TWO NOVELS at the same time??!!! Oh, my stars. And you ain't playing, neither. Wow.
Guys being so aggressive with a young girl. Guns already coming out. Whew! If this is just chapter THREE what else do you have in mind?
And four thousand dollars (possibly) for a horse?? I had no idea!
Great start!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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During the research I did that's pretty cheap. Both this novel and Football are complete. I am in the process of writing another novel. I am hoping their names don't wander into each other's story. LOL Thank you.
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WOW. You're my hero!
