Lights, Camera....Action?
Doggone It!9 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Today I just watched the movie Benji. I could not help to think about this movie when reading your poem. Your poem expresses the feeling of quitting. The dog found a home in your poem; that in itself was an accomplishment.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Today I just watched the movie Benji. I could not help to think about this movie when reading your poem. Your poem expresses the feeling of quitting. The dog found a home in your poem; that in itself was an accomplishment.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much for this great review. I love that movie, one of my favorites. Thanks again. :)
Comment from LJbutterfly
You creatively used the three required words for the contest, but you also created a captivating story in a poem. It included drama, humor, and suspense. My favorite lines were:
They held up a steak, just out of his reach,
thinking he would go crazy, but no.
He just laid down, when he knew what was up,
refusing to put on a show.
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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You creatively used the three required words for the contest, but you also created a captivating story in a poem. It included drama, humor, and suspense. My favorite lines were:
They held up a steak, just out of his reach,
thinking he would go crazy, but no.
He just laid down, when he knew what was up,
refusing to put on a show.
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this nice review, it's very appreciated. Have a great evening. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Dogs who can't act. LoL funny
Excellent entry for the 3 Words In A Poem writing prompt contest. Good composition with the required words. Yours is my favorite thus far. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Dogs who can't act. LoL funny
Excellent entry for the 3 Words In A Poem writing prompt contest. Good composition with the required words. Yours is my favorite thus far. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Wendy G
I am glad your poem had a happy ending - I feared what the director might do. Well done with the smooth rhyming and rhythm and metre, and on giving a whole story in a poem. Best wishes fro your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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I am glad your poem had a happy ending - I feared what the director might do. Well done with the smooth rhyming and rhythm and metre, and on giving a whole story in a poem. Best wishes fro your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you. I think the dog bested them all. Thank you for reading my poem. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is such a funny and cute story. I like that you made the pit bull a loveable fur ball! There is so much stigma surrounding this breed and they are the sweetest dogs!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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This is such a funny and cute story. I like that you made the pit bull a loveable fur ball! There is so much stigma surrounding this breed and they are the sweetest dogs!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks for this great 6 star review, it means a lot to me. :)
Comment from The Journaler
I love it. You have given us a new look at Pits. There are some who live up to their hype, but others, like this one, who are sweet and great. My niece had several. Glad that Bentley found a good home!
Good job!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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I love it. You have given us a new look at Pits. There are some who live up to their hype, but others, like this one, who are sweet and great. My niece had several. Glad that Bentley found a good home!
Good job!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks, I'm so glad you like my poem. Just like people, there are good and bad dogs. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
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You are welcome. And yes, you are correct..there are good and bad dogs..people, etc.!
Comment from LisaMay
I enjoyed your story poem, where you integrated the required words well.
That Pitt Bull pooch, Bentley, showed a lot of common sense by not cooperating with the horror genre, and look where it got him - a nice home and a kind companion in Joe.
For Bentley the Pit Bull, it all ended will, (ended well??)
at his new owners feet. (add apostrophe: owner's)
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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I enjoyed your story poem, where you integrated the required words well.
That Pitt Bull pooch, Bentley, showed a lot of common sense by not cooperating with the horror genre, and look where it got him - a nice home and a kind companion in Joe.
For Bentley the Pit Bull, it all ended will, (ended well??)
at his new owners feet. (add apostrophe: owner's)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this nice review and correcting my typo...I appreciate it very much. :)
Comment from lindafisher
ThisIs a very uplifting poem. The description of how the film makers made this friendly dog look vicious is really amusing. I love a story with a happy ending.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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ThisIs a very uplifting poem. The description of how the film makers made this friendly dog look vicious is really amusing. I love a story with a happy ending.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this nice review...I like happy ending too. :)
Comment from dellsworthpoet
The poem meets the requirements. The flow is good. The rhymes work. The poem stays on point. The images are defined.
Suggestion:
My main suggestion is to use a smaller font or shorten the lines to fit without line wrapping. A line being split into two makes the reading more jagged and the rhyme scheme then seems to be off.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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The poem meets the requirements. The flow is good. The rhymes work. The poem stays on point. The images are defined.
Suggestion:
My main suggestion is to use a smaller font or shorten the lines to fit without line wrapping. A line being split into two makes the reading more jagged and the rhyme scheme then seems to be off.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your excellent suggestions...I'll look it over. :)
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You are welcome.
