Dancer's Prayer/reposted
There is nothing closer to love than dance38 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written love poem. It has a great flow and rhyme. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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This is a nicely written love poem. It has a great flow and rhyme. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest. Nicely done.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Joanne, for the great review and kind words.
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Your welcome
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Your welcome
Comment from JT traveller
I can only agree, a romantic dance where two bodies and two minds meet and connect is akin to making love and a way of showing love.
A truly entrancing poem, written with finesse and flair. An eloquent love poem. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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I can only agree, a romantic dance where two bodies and two minds meet and connect is akin to making love and a way of showing love.
A truly entrancing poem, written with finesse and flair. An eloquent love poem. Best of luck.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you, JT, for the great review and inspiring words.
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Thank you for the poem John.
Comment from Julie Lau
John, that is an absolutely beautiful poem and deserves to do well. You must be a true romantic to write with such feeling. All the best with future writings: I see you've done very well in the past. Regards, Julie Lau
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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John, that is an absolutely beautiful poem and deserves to do well. You must be a true romantic to write with such feeling. All the best with future writings: I see you've done very well in the past. Regards, Julie Lau
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Julie, thank you for the great review and the best wishes for my future writing.
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Dear John,
I love this poem. How wonderful to relate dance to love. I love the title Dancers prayer. This is a wonderful poem. Great job. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Dear John,
I love this poem. How wonderful to relate dance to love. I love the title Dancers prayer. This is a wonderful poem. Great job. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the review, Darlene. I appreciate all.
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Your welcome.
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Your welcome John
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great poem for the contest. I love the progression of different dances combined with the response of the beloved ending with the beautiful phrase that there's purpose in each dance we share!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Great poem for the contest. I love the progression of different dances combined with the response of the beloved ending with the beautiful phrase that there's purpose in each dance we share!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Theodore for the kind review.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Very nice. Has a flow to it as if Lombardi himself was leading his band triumphantly, and you and your beloved were arm in arm waltzing along to his favorite songs.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Very nice. Has a flow to it as if Lombardi himself was leading his band triumphantly, and you and your beloved were arm in arm waltzing along to his favorite songs.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Tom. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Guy not Vince
Comment from Heather Burroughs
This is a fantastic poem. I see the close relationship of dance and love. You did a wonderful job depicting this. Good luck to you with your entry. Many blessings to you.
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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This is a fantastic poem. I see the close relationship of dance and love. You did a wonderful job depicting this. Good luck to you with your entry. Many blessings to you.
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the review, Heather.
Comment from Paul McFarland
It took me a couple of reads, but I finally grabbed onto most of this poem. The third to last stanza still puzzles me. This is a good love poem, and I wish you luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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It took me a couple of reads, but I finally grabbed onto most of this poem. The third to last stanza still puzzles me. This is a good love poem, and I wish you luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the review, Paul. I wrote this years ago. I had to jiggle my brain a bit to remember what I was thinking at that time. I believe in this stanza; I was referring to one of life's struggles (depression) and asking for my partner to go on without me if he need be. I hope that gave you a bit more insight. Thank you again my friend.
