Pray
It is important.4 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
I must have missed this one along the way. You are getting better on the short stuff. The picture is perfect for the poem. I don't think there is enough praying going on.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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I must have missed this one along the way. You are getting better on the short stuff. The picture is perfect for the poem. I don't think there is enough praying going on.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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It is over.
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
It truly is always very difficult to make a powerful statement that will make a difference. You have expressed your thoughts well in this 1-6-1 poem.
The two single words presented speaks action and volumes: Say! And Pray!
You have connected those 2 words giving a possible solution of embracing kindness to others and requesting that one share "Kind Words Everyday " .
For me any kindness shown in good faith and spoken from the heart to another human is worthy of positive 'fruitfulness' no matter how it is accepted or what fruit it bears. All the best with your writing.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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It truly is always very difficult to make a powerful statement that will make a difference. You have expressed your thoughts well in this 1-6-1 poem.
The two single words presented speaks action and volumes: Say! And Pray!
You have connected those 2 words giving a possible solution of embracing kindness to others and requesting that one share "Kind Words Everyday " .
For me any kindness shown in good faith and spoken from the heart to another human is worthy of positive 'fruitfulness' no matter how it is accepted or what fruit it bears. All the best with your writing.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thanks for your comments. Have you read my 579 syllable poem?
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Thank you pookietoo. I will.
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Thanks
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You have created a very heart-felt poem here with very few words and a great picture to illustrate it. Some people forget that kindness is part of prayer. Good luck with this in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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You have created a very heart-felt poem here with very few words and a great picture to illustrate it. Some people forget that kindness is part of prayer. Good luck with this in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We stroke ourselves with love when we use kind words and speak them in a pray, it has the power to uplift us every day, much enjoyed, sweet words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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We stroke ourselves with love when we use kind words and speak them in a pray, it has the power to uplift us every day, much enjoyed, sweet words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you.
