Having A Good Day
enjoying a day off5 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
A celebration of life, especially in you live in the hollow more than ten miles from civilization. I wrote a story about a man who lived in the Hollow of Appalachia. Seems you knew him.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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A celebration of life, especially in you live in the hollow more than ten miles from civilization. I wrote a story about a man who lived in the Hollow of Appalachia. Seems you knew him.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you. I don't quite live in the hollow, but I'm close enough to have met some of them thar folks what do. I'll have to look for your story.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This is such a humorous poem. Like the contents of it, it tells us what our day is going to be like. We get out of bed and bump our head; went to the kitchen and spilled our coffee.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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This is such a humorous poem. Like the contents of it, it tells us what our day is going to be like. We get out of bed and bump our head; went to the kitchen and spilled our coffee.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you so very very much.
Comment from Paul McFarland
You have some great material here. You have done a good job with the rhyme, but you have some work to do with the meter. If you clean this up, you will have a good one.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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You have some great material here. You have done a good job with the rhyme, but you have some work to do with the meter. If you clean this up, you will have a good one.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you. Meter is always my downfall.
Comment from Chris Davies
Success! You made this reader laugh. The picture alone might have done it, but the poem was awesome. Loved your rhymes. Wish you best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Success! You made this reader laugh. The picture alone might have done it, but the poem was awesome. Loved your rhymes. Wish you best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you. Glad it made you laugh because you just did wonders for my smile.
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Dear writer,
I read your poem and did laugh. I also cried thinking of all that coffee you lost plus the scars you incurred. Hot coffee isn't fun but I am sure the fifth of Jack helped ease the pain. The artwork goes great with your poem. The language was creative and comical. Great job. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Dear writer,
I read your poem and did laugh. I also cried thinking of all that coffee you lost plus the scars you incurred. Hot coffee isn't fun but I am sure the fifth of Jack helped ease the pain. The artwork goes great with your poem. The language was creative and comical. Great job. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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A fifth of jack eases everything, tho in this guys case I'm sure it was more likely a jug of moon. Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and give me a smile.
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Thank you for sharing your comical poem. Best wishes in the contest.
