Green Pools
Lantern Entry7 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Lanturne Poetry writing prompt contest. I love the lanturne poetic form. You followed the rules well. I love the presentation and imagery.
It's easy to get lost in such beautiful eyes.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Excellent entry for the Lanturne Poetry writing prompt contest. I love the lanturne poetic form. You followed the rules well. I love the presentation and imagery.
It's easy to get lost in such beautiful eyes.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Wils a terrific Thursday to you, how this review finds you well. You executed your poem well and it goes well with the picture. Good luck in the contest and have a great day.
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Hello Wils a terrific Thursday to you, how this review finds you well. You executed your poem well and it goes well with the picture. Good luck in the contest and have a great day.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. You presented it well--the picture is beautiful, and your words are filled with great imagery. Great job, too, with the requirements of the prompt.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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This is a great contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. You presented it well--the picture is beautiful, and your words are filled with great imagery. Great job, too, with the requirements of the prompt.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
Comment from Thatguypk
I don't usually pay much attention to these very short poems, but I was drawn to this one because it hit home. My good wife just happens to have hypnotic green eyes, which was what first attracted me to her, so I empathise with your verse. I'll make sure she reads it. Good luck.
PK
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I don't usually pay much attention to these very short poems, but I was drawn to this one because it hit home. My good wife just happens to have hypnotic green eyes, which was what first attracted me to her, so I empathise with your verse. I'll make sure she reads it. Good luck.
PK
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
Comment from shelley kaye
aww this was so sweet for "her"!
not sure if "shore" flows well, but that could be just me lol
nice work
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
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aww this was so sweet for "her"!
not sure if "shore" flows well, but that could be just me lol
nice work
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent romantic lanturne poem for the contest
with very good imagery in the few lines.
I like the use of "e" and "o" in the poem
which gives it a good sound.
Perfect picture to match.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
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This is an excellent romantic lanturne poem for the contest
with very good imagery in the few lines.
I like the use of "e" and "o" in the poem
which gives it a good sound.
Perfect picture to match.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Good response to the lanturne poetry prompt. You adhered to the structure effortlessly. The image of green pools for the eyes is a striking image. Well done.
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Good response to the lanturne poetry prompt. You adhered to the structure effortlessly. The image of green pools for the eyes is a striking image. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
