Wild Night in Bangkok
after a wlld night in Bangkok3 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
After a night of drinking no wonder he thought he had Covid!. He looked in the mirror looked pretty tough.
Good work. An enjoyable read.
The last word is scrambled.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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After a night of drinking no wonder he thought he had Covid!. He looked in the mirror looked pretty tough.
Good work. An enjoyable read.
The last word is scrambled.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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yeah sometimes after a long night looking in the mirror can be quite a shock.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This was enjoyable to read, Jake. You did a spectacular job with what you had to work with. I had some wild nights, but never in Bangkok, lol. Impressive!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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This was enjoyable to read, Jake. You did a spectacular job with what you had to work with. I had some wild nights, but never in Bangkok, lol. Impressive!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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thanks it is like many of my "sam Adams" poems based on real life experiences. Sam Adams is my main fictional character. The name popped up in a dream and so most of my fictional protagonists are named Sam Adams who is a direct descendent of the colonial Sam Adams of the beer fame.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces uncertainty expressed in the mind of a protagonist as to whether he has been infected by COVID-19.
The work highlights his estranged outlook in a mirror; his quick resolution that he has been infected by COVID-19; and his longing for coffee. But permit me to ask you this question: what is the word that you used in ending your poem?
The work earns its texture through its effective use of alcoholic anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces uncertainty expressed in the mind of a protagonist as to whether he has been infected by COVID-19.
The work highlights his estranged outlook in a mirror; his quick resolution that he has been infected by COVID-19; and his longing for coffee. But permit me to ask you this question: what is the word that you used in ending your poem?
The work earns its texture through its effective use of alcoholic anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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thanks for the insightful critique as always
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Remain Blessed.
