Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from royowen
It's funny how we can feel like a cup of coffee in the most awkward times. A beautifully written free verse, showing us the full instalment of your abilities Jim, an excellent, expressive post. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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It's funny how we can feel like a cup of coffee in the most awkward times. A beautifully written free verse, showing us the full instalment of your abilities Jim, an excellent, expressive post. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Smiling back with appreciation, thank you, sir!
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Most welcome
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Good writing. Nice work.
I get the impression that just about anything would arouse his/her crave for coffee. It doesn't seem natural. Maybe room temperature root beer, or coconut, or pineapple, or anything more native to the atmosphere described.
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Good writing. Nice work.
I get the impression that just about anything would arouse his/her crave for coffee. It doesn't seem natural. Maybe room temperature root beer, or coconut, or pineapple, or anything more native to the atmosphere described.
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Thanks, Wayne ..our our Carolina coast often a cup of java wamrs the body after a jaunt along the sea.
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I'm sure it would. It would me, as well. I just didn't see coffee as fitting the atmosphere. I was looking for something more natural to the setting.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The concordance of and between aromas and sweetness, there collision, but the taste and sweetness is natural and after the sunrays all is there in natural order; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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The concordance of and between aromas and sweetness, there collision, but the taste and sweetness is natural and after the sunrays all is there in natural order; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Thank you kind sir!
