Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 107 "Sweetgrass"Musings of an old man - 2022
33 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
" collision of aroma and taste bring my thoughts into
a deep longing for a hot mug of coffee as I walk through the
succulent flowering Sweetgrass back home."
How closely our senses are related as a whiff of something familiar, brings back memories of the past.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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" collision of aroma and taste bring my thoughts into
a deep longing for a hot mug of coffee as I walk through the
succulent flowering Sweetgrass back home."
How closely our senses are related as a whiff of something familiar, brings back memories of the past.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you for reading my work.
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You are welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this Club entry with us. It causes me to want to sit back with a cup of tea and enjoy nature. Your describes were excellent. You chose the right words.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you for sharing this Club entry with us. It causes me to want to sit back with a cup of tea and enjoy nature. Your describes were excellent. You chose the right words.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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thank you very much...
Comment from Judy Lawless
This lovely poem does indeed conjure up a desire for a cup of hot coffee, French Vanilla, especially. The warmth of the sun is also very appealing these days, when we are stuck in freezing temperatures. Thanks for sharing JLR
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This lovely poem does indeed conjure up a desire for a cup of hot coffee, French Vanilla, especially. The warmth of the sun is also very appealing these days, when we are stuck in freezing temperatures. Thanks for sharing JLR
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Judy, thanks for taking the time to read my work.
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You're welcome, JLR
Comment from Sally Law
Love that sweetgrass! Georgia and Florida's shores have it in abundance. How I miss those strolls now as winter has settled in. Spring's not too far away, I tell myself. How I long to enjoy it again.
Splendid writing, Jay!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Love that sweetgrass! Georgia and Florida's shores have it in abundance. How I miss those strolls now as winter has settled in. Spring's not too far away, I tell myself. How I long to enjoy it again.
Splendid writing, Jay!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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sally, thank you so much!
Comment from lyenochka
Great entry for the club challenge! You made me curious about sweet grass but now I know what to expect if I should see them. I like how you blended the plant's aroma with the sight and smell of the sea.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Great entry for the club challenge! You made me curious about sweet grass but now I know what to expect if I should see them. I like how you blended the plant's aroma with the sight and smell of the sea.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Sweetgrass ', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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' Sweetgrass ', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you, smiling back.
You're welcome. Smiling back to you too.
Comment from Louise Muller
You have successfully created an image so clear that I can not only see it in front of me, but also imagine the smells that you write of. Congratulations on a very effective piece of writing.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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You have successfully created an image so clear that I can not only see it in front of me, but also imagine the smells that you write of. Congratulations on a very effective piece of writing.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Louise, thank you!
Comment from amahra
This was a great free verse style poem. Best wishes in the contest. I loved the descriptive writing that allowed me to actually smell the vanilla beans as an aroma. Great job!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This was a great free verse style poem. Best wishes in the contest. I loved the descriptive writing that allowed me to actually smell the vanilla beans as an aroma. Great job!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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amarha, thank you, this was just a writing prompt not a contest entry thanks for your review.
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
You have painted a beautiful scene! I wonder how serene it would be to sit at such a sight and write a comment for this poetry. Your words are well chosen and the poem flows smoothly.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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You have painted a beautiful scene! I wonder how serene it would be to sit at such a sight and write a comment for this poetry. Your words are well chosen and the poem flows smoothly.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from zanya
Poetry really takes us to a different place or setting, simply to be able to linger and enjoy whatever may be happening there and this is achieved beautifully here as we are invited to share and appreciate the aromas
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Poetry really takes us to a different place or setting, simply to be able to linger and enjoy whatever may be happening there and this is achieved beautifully here as we are invited to share and appreciate the aromas
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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zanya, yes lovers of nature have such a blank canvas to work with.
