The Visitor
He appeared at my door.3 total reviews
Comment from Louise Muller
You definitely succeeded in spreading sunshine, laughter, and cheer with this gorgeous poem. It is beautiful and reminds us of how important it is to stay positive, especially now. Good luck.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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You definitely succeeded in spreading sunshine, laughter, and cheer with this gorgeous poem. It is beautiful and reminds us of how important it is to stay positive, especially now. Good luck.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry. Good job with the rhyme, the smooth flow, and the great message. That hungry child possibly was a test by God and you passed with flying colors.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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I enjoyed your contest entry. Good job with the rhyme, the smooth flow, and the great message. That hungry child possibly was a test by God and you passed with flying colors.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Well, you have certainly spread love and cheer in this poem. How wonderful to wake up and the first thing you think of is how you can help others. Not many people have that mindset. Your poem flows very well. You have met the challenges of this contest as far as I can see. Your poem has a great rhyme scheme. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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Well, you have certainly spread love and cheer in this poem. How wonderful to wake up and the first thing you think of is how you can help others. Not many people have that mindset. Your poem flows very well. You have met the challenges of this contest as far as I can see. Your poem has a great rhyme scheme. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2022
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