Walk Softly
life need not be hard5 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I have one star left and it will be for this poem. I so agree with you that life is not supposed to be difficult. It seems lately that's how some like to live; your poem tells us to walk softly.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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I have one star left and it will be for this poem. I so agree with you that life is not supposed to be difficult. It seems lately that's how some like to live; your poem tells us to walk softly.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you so very much. I am so glad to know you share my thoughts.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is an excellent rhyming poem along with its acrostic requirement. The lines have some good enjambment and are not all single stand-alone statements such as is often the case with acrostic work. this flows well.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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This is an excellent rhyming poem along with its acrostic requirement. The lines have some good enjambment and are not all single stand-alone statements such as is often the case with acrostic work. this flows well.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great poem for the contest. You have expressed a great concept of how to walk along the journey of life. It was an uplifting poem and expresses a great way to live.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Great poem for the contest. You have expressed a great concept of how to walk along the journey of life. It was an uplifting poem and expresses a great way to live.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a nice review.
Comment from poetwatch
Bluemarble Joan, you write a delicate and lovely poem. I wish everyone was like you because no matter how fast in life one is" walking softly get us there." I'm the same way. I found out that life is a moment that should be treasured, enjoyed, not rush to be the first in line. We are here today and gone tomorrow, walk softly and enjoy the ride. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Bluemarble Joan, you write a delicate and lovely poem. I wish everyone was like you because no matter how fast in life one is" walking softly get us there." I'm the same way. I found out that life is a moment that should be treasured, enjoyed, not rush to be the first in line. We are here today and gone tomorrow, walk softly and enjoy the ride. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you for all the stars. I am so glad my poem came across the way I wanted it to.
Comment from royowen
What a lovely acrostic poem, that fairly sings it's soft melody to the heart of the reader, this is skilfully and deftly written and is a credit to the author, well done my friend, good luck, Roy
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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What a lovely acrostic poem, that fairly sings it's soft melody to the heart of the reader, this is skilfully and deftly written and is a credit to the author, well done my friend, good luck, Roy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much.
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