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Faith Depends on You

Your faith is to have belief.

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Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Great post for the writing prompt. These words say it all: Faith all depends on you. It would be best if you thought that strong belief of your faith. If you do it, then it will solve your problems. Pray, be optimistic, and rely on your confidence. Faith is what you make of it. It all requires optimism of yourself. If you have faith and don't take action, then nothing will be accomplished of your life. Don't rely on false faith. Take action! Make it happen and it will be realized.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    Thank you!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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The premise of this essay is good, but the second example (of the woman losing her home) has no explanation. This is a weakness that it would help if you could correct.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    Thank you! I have made the corrections. Is it good enough for five stars rating now? Can you please check?
reply by Katherine M. (k-11) on 21-Jan-2022
    I rarely change my ratings. I give you an opinion and reason for my rating that will allow your work to be better judged in the future. I think that's fair. Otherwise I just wouldn't bother to review and try to help.