Wild Rose
A girl who loved to tease.2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A good rhythm in this Limerick and I liked the unusual sentiment here too, a fine Limerick for the contest, not too lewd, I wish you luck, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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A good rhythm in this Limerick and I liked the unusual sentiment here too, a fine Limerick for the contest, not too lewd, I wish you luck, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Hey, Dolly, like this pic better. Have a sip for me. Thanks for your feedback.
Comment from lancellot
Yes, it is a nice limerick, the rhymes are there and the syllable count too. The ending is where I think some improvement could be made. It doesn't feel like a conclusion. I feels that there is more, but I know there isn't.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Yes, it is a nice limerick, the rhymes are there and the syllable count too. The ending is where I think some improvement could be made. It doesn't feel like a conclusion. I feels that there is more, but I know there isn't.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Changed the last two lines a bit. Thanks for the feedback.
