Literary Warfare
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
You use of personification enhances the story. I an taken with the poetic descriptions. Very enjoyable. Many readers if they are writers with identify with the frenzied activity. Well thought out
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
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You use of personification enhances the story. I an taken with the poetic descriptions. Very enjoyable. Many readers if they are writers with identify with the frenzied activity. Well thought out
Comment Written 27-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your digging into the archives.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces Jerry's successful outing as a creative writer.
The work highlights his bid to always come out as the best writer among his contemporaries; his love affair with Diane and how she used her already trending excellent writer's image to introduce Jerry's book of aliens to Skinner for prompt publication.
The work earns its texture through the effective use of flashbacks and name juxtaposition anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces Jerry's successful outing as a creative writer.
The work highlights his bid to always come out as the best writer among his contemporaries; his love affair with Diane and how she used her already trending excellent writer's image to introduce Jerry's book of aliens to Skinner for prompt publication.
The work earns its texture through the effective use of flashbacks and name juxtaposition anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you immensely!
I didn't think about Jerry besting Diane, merely a continuation of their banter. I expect a comparison further on of total earnings, she topping Jerry, fostering even greater dueling.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is an interesting story, Wayne. I was very surprised that the novel was a futuristic story about aliens. So happy for Jerry's success, and Diane's help getting it published. One thing, the first year you mention in the story is the 2050s, and then later you say something about the 1950s and 60s. Otherwise, well done.
A couple of typos: "escape to unconsciousness only after having experiendce(experienced) their pain..."
"Serial(Seriously?", Jerry, nothing. I love it."
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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This is an interesting story, Wayne. I was very surprised that the novel was a futuristic story about aliens. So happy for Jerry's success, and Diane's help getting it published. One thing, the first year you mention in the story is the 2050s, and then later you say something about the 1950s and 60s. Otherwise, well done.
A couple of typos: "escape to unconsciousness only after having experiendce(experienced) their pain..."
"Serial(Seriously?", Jerry, nothing. I love it."
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Serial is distortion favored in my wife's speech. I fracture lyrics, she morphs words.
Thank you for the excellent review.
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Awe, I wondered about that. You're welcome.
Comment from Carlos' girl
Small correction: in title " Capter should be Chapter"
This is very good piece of writing. Good character and plot development good pacing no grammatical errors and overall interesting read.
Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Small correction: in title " Capter should be Chapter"
This is very good piece of writing. Good character and plot development good pacing no grammatical errors and overall interesting read.
Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much!
Errors are what keeps me humble - that and poverty.
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Yes. Poverty is the great equalizer lol. I found out after i lost my career lol
Comment from Ricky1024
"Literary Warfare Chapter Three"
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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"Literary Warfare Chapter Three"
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you!
