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A Evening Chat with Grams

Sitting on the front porch under the stars

21 total reviews 
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is an adorable story of faith and love. It demonstrates how one generation should pass on to the next generation, the good news of the love of their Lord and Savior. This story reminded me of the one night I sat with my husband's Grandmother, talking together on her porch in Georgia, many years ago. Thanks for the memory.

One nit: Any spun around to look wide-eyed ('Amy' spun around)

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.

    Hugs, Carol
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
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This was a very creatively written piece. For, we never
realize when the lord is watching over us. And you
are very skilled at painting that picture. Keep Writng

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    Good morning! My apologies for being so far behind in responding but life crises keep happening. I truly appreciate you reading and enjoying my work. Thank you!

    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Yes, it's those sweet little stories that incorporate a collage of past memories or even wish thinking of how things could be. Hope and sweet thoughts keep us on the right track. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.

    Hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
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A very reflective post, and thought-provoking. Not sure that we become angels, as they are described as a different created being, but we certainly will get new resurrection bodies. I like the gentle interaction between grandmother and granddaughter, and the joyful anticipation of heaven - we can trust and be sure that it is both good and perfect. A lovely write.
Wendy

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.

    Hugs, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
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This is a beautiful spiritual story, Carol. The conversation between Amy and her grandma seems natural, although it isn't one I could ever imagine having with any of my grandchildren. Times have changed. Well written.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.

    Hugs, Carol
reply by Judy Lawless on 31-Jan-2022
    You?re very welcome, Carol.
Comment from lyenochka
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That's so sweet! It's that kind of conversation that gives little ones the reassurance of God's love and continual presence as well as the love that still surrounds even from beyond the grave.

Any spun around to look (Amy)
"Reckon its time (it's)

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.

    Hugs, Carol
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a very beautifully written spiritual story. Very beautiful photo choice to compliment your words as well. Very touching story of a grandmother and grandchild I enjoyed the read very much. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.

    Hugs, Carol
reply by Joanne Gill-Maddick on 31-Jan-2022
    Your welcome
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job with your story, Carol. I loved reading it. Your words are well chosen. They apply here as well to others who believe like the child and Grams. Yes, Grams is a wise woman. She has done well teaching her grand daughter about faith. The setting is beautiful and perfect for this story.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my post. I appreciate that you continue to follow the story and enjoy it. As usual, I am behind in responding.

    Hugs, Carol
Comment from Patty Palmer
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What a sweet story. I could picture Grams and the granddaughter sitting on the porch looking at the stars and talking about Heaven. I enjoyed the dialogue. It makes the story much more personal when you hear what they're actually saying. Great job!!!
((((HUGS)))))
Patty

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    Many years ago when my daughter died I had a similar conversation with my great granddaughter who wanted to know where her grandmother had disappeared to. I told her she wasn't gone...only she was one of the millions of stars (angels) watching over her and she should pick one so she could speak with her all the time.

    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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What a lovely chat on the porch between Grandma and Amy. I like the idea of the shooting stars being angels come to take the souls back to Heaven.
Did you ever watch 'Touched by an Angel'? I loved that series and the angel of death was gorgous, he could come and take me home any time!! I really enjoyed this little story, my friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    I loved Michael Landon and Highway to Heaven the preview to Touched by an Angel. I haven't seen it but I just recently saw it was coming to a satellite channel and I will have to watch it. Thanks for the awesome review as always.

    Hugs, Carol